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    The Tide Began to Rise

    Hey all, I’ve got a new story for y'all. But before I post it, I was to say this is a completely fictional story. I took it straight out of my crazy mind. I had help with it.

    Also before I start it, I wana say a special thanks to keigan86. He edited the story for me. He did this because I asked him to, and I’m to lazy to do it myself. so to him. Hope you all enjoy.

    Remember, this is not a true story, and I’m sorry if this brings back repressed memories.

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    Chapter 1

    School! The word brings two main things to my mind, Dread and excitement. Dread because I know that I don’t fit into any of the clichés that are in my school. Excitement because……………….because, well, the people that I can look at and day dream about. Excitement because I get to see my friends every day and most of all school gets me out of the house for at least for 8 hours of the day.

    It’s August and school starts in just a few days. I can’t wait! I’m starting my senior year. I turned 18 last month. I didn’t have a party though. Me and a few friends went and saw a movie. We also went and ate dinner at Quaker steak and Lube in Council Bluffs. I live in a small town about 20 miles south of there.

    Today is August 11th. James’s, one of my friends, birthday is tomorrow. He is having a huge party at his house. I need to buy him a present, but I don’t have any money. I will ask my mom when she gets home.
    “Tyler, get your ass down here and clean the kitchen.”

    “Ok dad, once second.” Oh shit….I shouldn’t have said that.

    I heard him coming up stairs and down the hall to my room. I had my door closed. He kicked it open.

    “What the hell did you say? …………………….When I tell you to do something, you drop everything else and do it. Do you understand me?” When he finished talking he waited 2 seconds, before walking over to me and back handing me across the face. “Answer my question boy.”

    “Yes.” He back handed me again.

    “What?”

    “Yes sir.” I said while crying

    “Stop you crying. Grow up and be a man like Tristan. Now get your pansy ass down stairs and clean the fucking kitchen.”

    He left the room. I sat crying on the floor. I stayed for 5 minutes, then got up and slowly went down stairs. My dad and half brother Tristan were sitting on the couch watching TV. I went into the kitchen and started cleaning. I had been cleaning for 2 hours when my mom got home.

    “Hey everyone, I brought KFC for dinner.”

    “About time you got home, I’m starving………….Tyler grab us some plates now.”

    I grabbed 5 plates and took them to them to the table. I gave one to everyone , then sat down. My dad got up, walked over to me and grabbed my arm. He squeezed hard. I could feel the bruise starting to form.

    “What in hell are you doing?”

    “Going to eat dinner.”

    He yanked me out of the chair, and threw me back into the kitchen. “You’re not eating until that kitchen is clean.”

    I looked to my mom. She turned her head, just like she did every time dad hurt me. I looked to my older brother Peter. He caught my gaze. He mouthed “sorry” then lowered his head and stared at his plate. I looked at Tristan. He was laughing. I think that he lives to torture me.

    I went back to cleaning. I did the dishes by hand. We had a dishwasher, but my dad forbids me to use it. He would never tell me why I couldn’t use it. When I did ask, he would beat me for asking to do something the simple way. So I learned to not ask question. Next I scrubbed the counters. That alone took me 30 minutes. Not because we have a lot of counter space, but because of the dried old, rotting food that was caked on there.

    There was more cleaning then that. After another hour and a half, I was done. They left the food sitting on the table. Well what was left of the food. There was almost nothing left. There was a half eaten leg, one bite of a biscuit and a bite of the mashed potatoes. I sat down at the table and began to cry.

    My mom came in. “Honey, what’s wrong?”

    “Is dad asleep?”

    “Yeah”

    “He made me clean, while you all ate. Then this is all that’s left……..Why didn’t you say something? Now I have to go to bed without anything to eat. He’s always doing this to me. He doesn’t do it to Tristan or Peter. Why is he so mean to me?” I put my face in my hands and cried. My mom didn’t move, she just stayed standing there.

    After 10 minutes, I lifted my head and found she was gone. I went upstairs. As I passed Peters room, I looked inside. He wasn’t in there. I went in. Peter smokes pot. I know where he hides it. I went into the closet and grabbed the old shoe box that was buried under a stack of clothes. I opened it up, took enough out to make 4 joints and hid the box once more.

    I went to my room. I sat on my bed and started thinking. Thinking about what it was that I did to get treated like dirt. Did I do something wrong? As I was thinking, I came to the realization that everything started when Tristan moved in. Before he came along I never got beat. Treated badly yes but never beaten. Tristan is the bastard son of my dad’s affair. He had the affair shortly before I was conceived. That is what Peter tells me. Tristan was born a few months before I was. I had met him a few times growing up, but I didn’t know he was my half brother. I didn’t learn that until 3 years ago. That’s when his bitch of a mother died. That’s when my life got all messed up.

    I sat on my bed thinking things over until midnight. At midnight I reached under my bed and grabbed 4 dog treats. Then I snuck out of the house. I walked a block to this alley. I did this every night. When I got to allies opening, I whistled.

    “Patch………….”*more whistling* “come here Patch.” 2 seconds later, the sounds of paws could be heard running down the alley. Seconds after hearing the paws hit the cement, I saw the familiar Black Russell Terrier. He jumped and landed in my arms. He began licking my face.

    “Ok………Ok…………. I missed you to Patch.” I walked over to a crate that was sitting next to a wall. I sat down. Patch knew that I had treats for him. Either it was because he could smell them, or because every night when I came here, I brought him some food. It’s never much but I bring what I can for him.

    I pulled out the 4 joints that I rolled I was sitting in my room. I grabbed a lighter I took from my dad, I put one in my mouth, lit it up and inhaled. It felt so good.

    “Patch, home is not getting any better. Dad slapped me in the face twice today, and then made me clean the kitchen before I could eat. By the time I was done, there was no food left. Do you think mom cared? ………………… No, she didn’t.” I took another drag. Patch was looking at me like he felt sorry for me.

    I sat there and smoked all four blunts. I was talking to and petting Patch. He seemed to hear, understand and care about what I was saying to him. But it was time to go home. I hugged Patch and walked back home. My dad was still asleep in the recliner, like ever night. He had passed out with a beer in one hand and a cigarette in the other hand. I went over to him; I took the beer and the cig. I dumped the beer in the sink and the cig in the trash. When I walked back to him, I saw that his wallet was laying on the end table.

    “I will probably get my ass beat 10 different shades of purple for this,” I said in my head “but I don’t care.” I grabbed the wallet and took out 400 dollars. I put the wallet back down and ran to my room. I got undressed and climbed into bed.

    My alarm went off a 6:30 am. Today is August 12th, and is James’s birthday. He has been one of my friends since the 7th grade. He is kind of a spoiled kid. He gets everything that he wants. It makes it very hard to shop for him.

    I got out of bed and went to the bathroom. I looked at myself in the mirror, not to check myself out., but to look at all the bruises and scars. I looked at the newest one on my arm from where dad grabbed me and threw me into the kitchen. One on my chest where a book hit, that he threw because I missed it when I cleaned the living room. There was a bruise on my stomach, where dad had punched me for talking while he was watching TV. There were scars on my chest from where dad would hold me down and burn me with his cigarettes. There were others, most fading but still tender to the touch.

    I went back to my room and got dressed. I headed down stairs to find my mom sitting at the table. I walked to the table and sat down.

    “Morning mom”

    “………………..” Mom said nothing.

    “Mom?”

    “…………………….” Still nothing.

    “Mom?” I practically yelled.

    “I’m sorry Tyler……about last night. I should have saved you some food.”

    “Forget about it mom…. Can I borrow your car today? It’s James’s birthday.”

    She seemed to think about it for a minute. Then she just got this blank look on her face.

    “Mom?”

    “What…..oh yeah, sure, take the car.”

    She threw me the keys. I drove to the nearest Best Buy. I had decided to buy him a new Stereo for his new car. His dad is a mechanic so that will save me money. The stereo that I picked out is the Phase linear- In- Dash CD/ DVD player with motorized face plate. I also decided to get him new speakers. I decided to do this because I knew that he hadn’t done anything to upgrade the car yet. All-in-all it cost me about 364 dollars before taxes.

    The party was not until later tonight. I decided to hang out at the mall. I went to a few stores, got some food. I got some wrapping paper for the gifts. At about 6 o’clock I decided to head to James’s house.

    On the way, I started to hear this rapid thud, thud, thud, thud, thud sound. I pulled over and got out of the car. I check the tires and I found that the rear passenger sides tire was flat.

    “FUCK” I yelled out.

    I looked in the trunk for a spare, nothing.

    “Shit….Shit…..Shit……”

    I pulled out my phone. I called my house. On the 5th ring I heard “hello?”

    “Oh thank god you picked up Pete. I need you to come pick me up. Mom’s car got a flat and there’s not spare or anything.”

    “Where are you?”

    “I’m on 275 just past Elrod.”

    “Ok.” He said and hung up the phone.

    15 minutes later Peter was pulling in behind me. He got out of the car and walked towards me.

    “Thanks Peter. I need a ride to James’s house.”

    He just looked at me.

    “Peter?”

    “Do you know what would have happened if Dad picked up that phone? Did you even think about that? Do you like that he hits you all the time. It seems that why by the fact that you didn’t think before you dialed that number. You should really think before you do stupid shit like this.”

    “Oh yeah Pete. I love that Dad hits me. I love all of the bruise that he gives me. I love the he treats me like a piece of shit. I love getting abused. But do you know what I love the most? I love when he burns me with his cigarettes. He treats you and that pansy fucker Tristan like kings………Go fuck you self. I’ll find another way to the party.” I began to cry.

    “I’m sorry Tyler. I didn’t mean that……….I’m sorry. I only meant to get you to think about what if Da………”

    He was cut off by head lights rounding the corner, and the horn of a big rig blowing. I closed my eyes and prepared for the impact.
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    I love the new story Tim I think everyone else will too. Please don't forget to rate the thread.


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    Wow tim this is an awesome story. The plot so far is excellent!

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    Thanks Tim. Great story.
    Please write again .... I do hope you have ideas lined up! Lol
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    Thanks guys, i do have some ideas lined up, but im always willing so hear what you think should happen and i will see what i can do with that idea.
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    You have me hooked.

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    Chapter 2 should be out later today, as long as i can get it typed up, and if keigan can get is all edited and sent back to me.
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    I can't wait for the next part.

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    OK it took me a lot long then I thought it would take to get this chapter typed up. but here is it. Again I want to thank my awesome editor Keigan. hugs to him.
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    The Tide Began to Rise
    Chapter 2

    ~Recap~
    “I’m sorry Tyler. I didn’t mean that……….I’m sorry. I only meant to get you to think about what if Da………”
    He was cut off by head lights rounding the corner, and the horn of a big rig blowing. I closed my eyes and prepared for the impact.
    _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

    I held my eyes shut. I never thought that this is how my life would end. Would my dad even care that I was gone? He might care that that there is now nobody to clean his house. I know Tristan wouldn’t care. He would probably spit on my grave.

    The impact never happened. Instead I heard screeching tires. I opened one eye to see the truck swerve to miss us and come to a stop. The driver got out of the truck and rushed over to us.
    “Are you guys ok?” he asked.

    “Yeah were fine. My brother got a flat tire out here and called me to help.” Peter said

    “Yeah, the car didn’t have a spare in it, so I had to call him.” I added.

    “Ok, I wanted to make sure. You guys shouldn’t be talking in the middle of the road though. You could get killed.”

    We both looked down to see where we were standing. Sure enough, we were in the middle of the road. We both looked up to the truck driver. “Oh, sorry, we didn’t notice where we were.”

    He checked one more time to see if we were ok, and then headed back to his truck. The next thing I knew, I was looking at the tail lights of the truck, fading into the distance. I turned to Peter. He shrugged his shoulders. I went back to mom’s car and got James’s gift. Once I had that in hand, I went to Pete’s car. I told him how to get to James’s house. We drove there in silence.

    It was 15 minutes later, when we were pulling up to the house. I told Peter thanks and got out. I walked up to the front door and rang the door bell. A minute or two later, the familiar face of James filled my vision. He is an oriental boy. But you can see a lot of American in him. I’m not sure where his family in from though. He’s about 5’8” with black hair and grey eyes.

    “Tyler you made it.” James said as he stepped outside and gave me a great big hug. I hugged back as best I could, but I was still holding the stereo that I bought. We broke the hug, and just stood there.

    “Are you going to let me in? Or are you going to make me stay out here all night?”

    From inside the house I heard “Make him stay out there.”

    The voice was unmistakable. I would be able to pick it out of a crowd of 100,000 people. Then she came into view. Brianna Daniels, my best friend in the entire world. Brie, as her friends called here is 5’7”, about 115 lbs with brown hair and hazel eyes. She has been my best friend since we were 5 years old. She was my next door neighbor. Her parents and mine would have BBQ’s all the time. We would play and hang out with each other all the time. We were practically inseparable. Then we got to junior high school. I had started noticing that I liked looking at other guys. I didn’t know what it meant. Brie knew though. She asked me one day if I was gay. I asked her what it meant to be gay. She told me and I told her I was. “Your secret is safe with me, for as long as you want to keep it.” She explained how society views gay people. Then I felt bad for being this way, but happy that I had a friend like Brie. From that moment on we became closer. People thought we were dating. That is how I like things, because nobody suspects I’m gay.

    “Make him stay outside; we don’t want his kind here.” Brie said with a huge smile on her face.

    “Awwwwwww, I love you to Brie. But it’s not your party. It’s James’s, so he’s the one that can send me home or not.” I stuck my tongue out at her, and then smiled.

    James stepped out of the way and I walked into the house. I gave brie a hug. I turned back to James. “Oh, happy birthday dude.” I handed him his gifts. “Thanks man.” He said as he walked to the table that had all his presents on it.

    “Well, come on in, join the party. Mingle with people, eat the food.” James said.

    I looked around. There was a lot of people from school there. James is a pretty popular kid in school. But when your family has money and you live in a small town, you are pretty much guaranteed to be popular. Most of the people that are at this party don’t even know that I’m alive. (Let’s put it this way, If I died, the only reason that more than 6 people would show up to the funeral is because it would get them out of school.) Some I know and talk to. There were only 4 people there that I hang out with; Brie, James, Brad Cullen, and James’s girlfriend Jennifer Hones.

    I noticed that Brad was sitting on the couch, so I went over and sat with him.

    “Hey Brad……..How’s it going dude?”

    “Oh, hey Tyler. I’m great. When did you get here?”

    “Oh umm….I just walked in the door maybe 10 minutes ago. I was on my way over and I got a flat tire. I had to call home. Good thing Peter picked up. My dad would have bea…….”

    “What?”

    “Umm, nothing, never mind……….So are you excited for school starting tomorrow?”

    “Ummmm………..Yeah I guess so.”

    Brie came over and sat on my lap.

    “Oh………………………my………………………….god……………………….. I ……………………can’t…………………………breathe………………………..to………………… ……………..heavey.”

    Brie jumped off me. I looked at her and smiled. She smiled back, and then punched me in the arm.


    ~Brads POV~

    Tyler and brie make a very cute couple. Even though they pick on each other, you can just look at them and tell that they love each other. Watching them gave me this hurt, jealous feeling in the pit of my stomach. I’ve had a crush on Tyler since middle school. Nobody knows I’m gay. If I came out, my life would be ruined. I’m sure that everyone thinks that. I’ve heard stories about what happens to kids who come out. There was someone here in Iowa that was beat within an inch of his life, then tied to a fence and left to die.

    So I will just keep my feelings to myself. I will take the images that I will get when I see him in the locker room, and put them to good use.

    For now, I will just have to watch Brianna and Tyler hang all over each other. Hopefully someday soon I can express how I feel, and that he will feel the same way. I hope that if and when I tell him, he won’t get mad at me.


    ~Back To Tyler’s POV~

    Brad, Brie and I were all sitting on the couch joking with each. The rest of the party went on without us. There were a few people that said hi to Brad, and more than a few that said hi or had a small conversation with Brie. She is a very pretty girl. She is very popular with the guys. She wears nothing but the latest and sexy trends.

    “Ok I have to go pee.” Brad said as he stood up and then headed off to the bathroom.

    My eyes followed brad as he walked away. He passed a group of guys. As he passed them, my gaze locked on one guy, a 6’3” Adonis with curly blonde hair and blue eyes. The captain of the schools state champs soccer team. Brent Macomb. He is an angel. He could walk into a room, and light it with the glow from his skin.

    I love staring at him. He is the man of my dreams I loved to imagine him marrying me and us spending the rest of our lives together.

    Brad had returned from the bathroom. When he got there he could see that I was starting at something. He followed my gaze. It ended on Brent. I snapped out of it and saw Brad there. Shit” I thought. Brad looked at me with a strange look on his face.

    “Umm………..It’s late…………..I got to get home.” I rushed out the door. I called my brother. He came and picked me up.

    When got home. Peter went in fist, while I sat in the car for a bit. “SHIT,” I said, “Brad saw me starring at Brent. What am I going to do?”

    I decided to go inside and go to sleep. I have school in the morning. I walked in the door. My dad was standing there. He had that look on his face. “Damn it” was all I could say in my head.

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    Ok there is chapter 2, let me know what you guys think.
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    I think I'm ready for chapter 3. This story has a lot of potential.

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    I will try and get it done here pretty soon. Im still working on setting up the characters, but i should be done with that in the next chapter, or i might have finished it with this, im not sure, what to wait and see what my crazy messed up head comes up with.
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    Quote Originally Posted by TimWhite07 View Post
    I will try and get it done here pretty soon. Im still working on setting up the characters, but i should be done with that in the next chapter, or i might have finished it with this, im not sure, what to wait and see what my crazy messed up head comes up with.

    Based on what I've seen so far your crazy head should come up with something good.

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    lol, thanks i will try not to disappoint ya....
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    wow mate - i am so impressed - what a great story
    i love it
    congratulations

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    I'm wayyy too anxious for chapter 3!

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    produciton is underway for it.
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    Zack cut Tim off till chapter three is done... Just kidding Tim great story

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    Okay Zack make Cody happy so he has inspiration for chapter three.

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    Tim, Thank you.
    Great chapter
    Is it the missing money or the flat tyre that has got his Father pissed?
    More please
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    Im working on chapter 3. Im not sure what the reason is, or if you find out. Like i said before im writing this as my mind thinks about it. AND what a crazy mind it is. So when i post the cahpter you will know what happens. it will be no later then a day after i know what happens. the hardest thing for me to do it come up with a good cliff hanger.
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    The Tide Began To Rise
    Chapter 3


    ~Recap~

    When we got home, Peter went in first, while I sat in the car for a bit. “Shit” I said “Brad saw me starting at Brent. What am I going to do?”

    I decided to go inside and go to sleep. I have school in the morning. I walked in the door. My dad was standing there. He had that look on his face. “Damn it” was all I could say in my head.

    _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _

    My dad raced forward and grabbed my throat. He began hitting me with his free hand. He gave me slaps to my face, punches to my chest and stomach. With each blow to the chest, I gasped for air. With each blow to the gut, I tired to double over. When I tired, the grip my dad had on my throat became tighter. I tired to cry out for mom or Peter, but no sounds came out.

    The whole time dad was wailing on me, he made no sound. His eyes never changed. The grip he had on my throat loosened and I took in a deep breath. I knew this was only the beginning.

    He had stopped hitting me. He still had the grip on my throat. He took off his belt. He threw me to the stairs. He cracked the belt across my back. I screamed out in pain. I got up and ran to my room. He chased me, hitting me with his whip every chance he got. I got to my room. I tried to close the door, but he was there.

    “Dad……………………………Please………………………….Stop” I cried out. Tear streaming down my face.

    Still no sounds had escaped my dad’s mouth. There was no change in expression on his face. He knocked me down, I landed on my bed. Then he began the relentless assault on me with his leather belt. He hit my legs, my sides, and my chest. I put my arms in front of my face to keep him from hitting it. He dropped the belt, grabbed and arms and moved them out of the way. He grabbed my throat once more, and applied pressure. I blacked out.

    I woke up the next morning in so much pain. It hurt to move. It hurt to breathe. I got up and made my way to the bathroom. I looked in the mirror after I got my shirt off. My entire chest was a bruise. There was dried blood everywhere. I trued to see my back. It was the same as the front.

    I sighed, and then got in the shower. I winced in pain from the water getting in my cuts. I almost screamed out when I used soap to scrub the blood away. I finished the shower and went back to my room to get dressed. I picked out a pair of jeans and a plain black, long sleeve shirt. Even though it is August and going to be warm out side, I wore these clothes to hide the cuts, and the bruises. I don’t want people at school to know what is going on at home.

    After I got dressed, I headed down stairs. My dad was in the kitchen with Peter and Tristan. They were eating breakfast. I decided that I would grab some pop tart, and just walked to school. Peter looked at me with a look that asked me why I wasn’t going to eat with them. Tristan looked at me with a look that he knew what happened, and found it hilarious. He had a huge smile on his face.

    I walked out of the house and started walking down the street to school. The whole way I thought about how I could get out of the hell whole that is my life. I tried to figure out a way if it was possible to change that way my dad acts. Does he do these thing because the stupid things that I do. Then it hit me, he know it was me that took that money. That has to be the reason for the beating.

    I got to the school at about 7:30. I walked in and went to the office to get my class schedule. I looked it over. I made sure that I got all the classes that I signed for. I looked at each class and looked at what teacher was going to be teaching what class. I knew all of the teachers except one. The math teacher was new. The piece of paper said his name was Mr. Snodgrass. I guess when I get to my 6th hour class I will see what he is like.

    I went over to the cafeteria and sat down at one of the tables. I just sat there a read and re-read my class schedule. After a bit, James walked up and sat down beside me.

    “Hey Tyler, What happened to you last night? Why did u leave the party so soon?”

    “Hey James, I don’t know. I guess I just wanted a good night’s sleep before school.”

    “You are so full of shit, you stink. But I love you man. OH, and thanks for the stereo system. I was going to buy the same one after my birthday. I love it dude.”

    “No problem. I figured that you would have waited until after your birthday to trick out your car. It looks like I was right.”

    “Yeah you were. Everyone else got me clothes or other stupid stuff like that. Jennifer gave me something really special. Of course that was after everyone else left. I wanted to get my gift before everyone was gone, but she made me wait. Ha ha ha.”

    “Yeah I bet you did. And I bet you wanted to get this gift where everyone else could see also. Haha”

    “Duh dude, gotta have an audience when having sex. Makes it lots more fun.”

    Jennifer walked over to us. “What are you two boys talking about?”

    Jennifer is James’ girlfriend. She is an African American goddess. She has gorgeous long black hair, light brown eyes, and she is about 5’7”. She and James have been dating for a little over a year. To me, they are perfect for each other.

    “Talking about how ugly you are.” I said. That earned me one good smack to the back of my head.

    We sat there talking and bullshitting until the bell rang for the class to get started. My first hour class is PC repair. The class is being though by Mr. Harding. The class is a full credit course for high school and for college credits. I’m not sure what I want to do with that rest of my life, but I’m sure that this will come in handy at some point.

    All the classes went about the same. Each teacher gave us a book, and then we went over the class outline. Yawn fest. Lunch was right after our 5th hour. I sat with the few friends that I have and ate. We really didn’t have much to talk about though. The bell rang and it was time for 6th period. During lunch I found out Brad and I had the class together.

    We walked to the room, and found a place to sit.

    “Hello class, my name is Mr. Snodgrass. As you might have guessed it is my job to attempt to teach you math. I don’t expect all of you to get an A in this class. Honestly I didn’t get an A in math when I was in high school. But I will try my best to get you to understand this stuff. No-one will fail this course. I will give you extra credit to prevent that.

    “Ok a little more about me……..first thing…..I HATE KIDS………no I’m kidding, I like kids. I am 27 years old, I graduated this last year. This is my first year teaching……….Ok let’s get to math now.”

    H handed out our books. When he got to me, he paused. HE most likely wondered why I was wearing a long sleeve shirt. He moved on. We went through the book. He told us everything that we would be learning this semester. Then he let us have a free day. Brad and I talked; thank god he said nothing about last night.

    As the end of class bell rang I reached down to pick up my stuff off the floor, my shirt came up my back a little. I quickly pulled it down but I think Snodgrass saw the bruises. I saw him make a note as I ran out of the room.

    The rest of the day I wondered if he saw my back. I wondered if he would tell someone and what would happen if he did.
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    This is a good story even though it brings back some of my childhood memories that were like this, but I cant wait to read the next chapter.


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    Im sorry that it brings back some memories for you. im not meaning to. i dont know y i started writing this story. the conecpt just popped in my head and i couldnt get it out. i dont know how the story will go it is just how i feel at the time.

    again im sorry for the painful memories
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    Tim,
    It's a vivid story. I, too, have been a little concerned about the darker elements, but I guess this serves, poignantly, to remind us that not everyone's life has been a bed of roses, or just plain "normal" teen angst of hormones,etc.

    There are people out there who don't talk to their kids, or become obsessed.
    The objects of their obsessions are not always put on pedestals.

    I hope our young protagonist finds a way to come to terms with his current situation, and a way to improve it. The half brother is certainly a piece of work.
    I'm trying to figure him out, knowing he's the proverbial bastard, and has been his whole life - no full time father till now. I still can't reconcile the attitude.

    You have a very real writing style. If I could ask you to try and avoid "textspeak" in the story? It can distract from your story, a bit. I think you are trying, since I've only seen it a little. Hard habit to get out of when you use it all day.

    It's a good story, so far. I have some trepidation, but I still look forward to your next installment.


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    Quote Originally Posted by TimWhite07 View Post
    Im sorry that it brings back some memories for you. im not meaning to. i dont know y i started writing this story. the conecpt just popped in my head and i couldnt get it out. i dont know how the story will go it is just how i feel at the time.

    again im sorry for the painful memories


    Oh that is no problem at all. Don't worry about it because this a good story. Not to mention I am over that part of my life.

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    im glad to hear that u are over that, and i wont worry then. i will continue with this crazy messed up psycho story that i have going. lol
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    Hey everyone. Im Tim's BF. I have a little bit of news for u. On tuesday Tim was in a car accident and broke his right arm. He is fine nothing to serious. Not sure when he will be able to get back to writing this. I know he has the next chapter started. I will help him write if he wants me to.

    I just wanted to let yall know so u dont worry and wonder when the next chapter comes will come out.
    I love you Tim.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ZachBurry View Post
    Hey everyone. Im Tim's BF. I have a little bit of news for u. On tuesday Tim was in a car accident and broke his right arm. He is fine nothing to serious. Not sure when he will be able to get back to writing this. I know he has the next chapter started. I will help him write if he wants me to.

    I just wanted to let yall know so u dont worry and wonder when the next chapter comes will come out.
    I'm so sorry to hear this. His health is more important than our satisfation. I'm waiting his good news more than the new chapter. Hope he recovers ASAP. Take care of him

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    Get well, soon.
    I'm told the itching in the cast can be oh so much "fun"
    (can drive you nuts!)
    Might not be a good time to take up sky diving as a hobby!
    (Just kidding!)


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    The tide began to rise
    Chapter 4

    The school day ended, and I met up with James, Brad, Jennifer, and Brie outside the school. We talked about our classes. What we think this year is going to be like. Well they talked about that stuff. I was mesmerized by my prince. Brent was sitting across the parking lot, talking with his friends.

    Brie said my name, which brought me out of my trance.

    “Tyler, you coming?” Brie said.

    “Huh, what? Were we going?” I asked.

    “Stop staring at Ashley and pay attention me and.” James said.

    “OK fine, but where are we going?”

    “Going down to Pizza Hut.” Brad said.

    “Why?” I asked

    “Because, LaDeena is going to give us free food.”

    “Sounds like a good enough reason for me.” I said

    We all went to get in our cars. Well I don’t have a car, so I went to get in Brie’s car. We talked a little bit on the way. The drive was not a long one. It probably took about 5 minutes with the stop signs and red lights.

    We pulled in the parking lot and then went inside. We know the manager of the place. When we walked in, she came out from behind the counter to say hi to all of us. We all exchanged pleasantries, and then she showed us to our table.

    “Ok guys and gals, I’m going to be your server…………what do you all want to drink?”

    “Root Beer” I said

    “Pepsi” Brie said

    “Water” Jennifer said

    “Tea” Brad said

    “Root Beer” James Said

    “Ok, I will be right back with the drinks so to get your order.”

    LaDeena went back and got our drinks. While she was gone we talked about what we wanted to get. Of course we were going to get a family order of cheese sticks and a order of 20 hot wings. By the time she got back with our drinks we all agreed upon 2 medium pizzas. One half beef and on the half pepperoni. The other pizza with half taco and the other half ham and pineapple. That is such a good pizza.

    LaDeena put our order into the computer and went to go make it. We talked about our first day of school. What we thought of the teachers. Brad said that he was thinking about dropping a class. I told them that a few of my classes are going to be switching because of the teachers and the amount of students in the classes.

    The hot wings and bread sticks came out. We inhaled them like those things were nothing. They never really had a chance to rest on the table. I don’t think they were sitting there for more then 2 minutes. Then the pizza came out. We all sat quietly and ate.

    After a while LaDeena came back to check on how we were doing.

    “Ok guys, It is on the house today. But I guess that you already knew that. You all come back soon.” She said and then walked away.

    “Hey guys, let’s leave her a really good tip.” I said.

    We all grabbed our wallets or money holder and took out some cash. We all ended up leaving 6 bucks. Nice 30 dollar tip. Then we all went to the cars. Brie drove me home. We talked along the way.

    “Hey Brie, can I ask you something?”

    “Other then what you did, sure.”

    “Very funny, I’m serious though. I need some advice with something.’

    “Tyler, I’m always here for you. You can come to me when ever you need something.”

    “Ok, well I want to know if you think that it would be a good idea if I came out to everyone. I mean I don’t want to be made fun of, but I can’t be my self. What do you think?

    There was a pause.

    “Brie?”

    “I can’t answer that. Only you can. You have to go with what ever you think is right. Either way it is going to be hard. But all I’m going to say is life may be easier for you if you don’t come out. I mean, yeah you can’t be yourself, but then you aren’t getting picked on of bullied. Both sides of this have their upsides and they both have their downsides. You have to weight the options of both and make your choice. What ever you chose to do, I will be your friends and that will never change. Got it?”

    “Yeah I got it. Thanks Brie. I love you. Thanks for the ride.”

    “I love you to Tyler. And no problem, I will see tomorrow.”

    I hugged her and got out of the car. Then I walked to the front door. As I reached for the door handle, I froze. Images of the night before flashed through my head. I went over to the window to make sure that dad was watching TV. He was. “Thank God” I sighed. I went back to the front door and then went inside.

    “Hi Mom, Hi Dad.”

    “Hey honey, how was your first day of school?” My mom asked.

    “It was gre………….”

    “Never mind that. Where the hell have you been, It’s 6:30. School ended 3 hours ago.” My dad said, cutting me off.

    “I was hungry, so I went out with some friends.”

    “Friends? Who would want to be friends with some pansy ass loser like you?” Tristan said while walking into the room.

    “Shut the hell up Tristan. At least I’m not a bastard child.”

    “No, but you’re the one that da………’

    “Knock it off” my dad said. He stood up from his chair. Fearing another beating, I ran up to my room. I expected my dad to come barreling throw the door, but he never came. I found it hard to wait until 12 o’clock. I wasn’t sure why. Maybe it was because I knew what tomorrow was going to bring.

    I went down to the alley and spent the usual amount of time with Patch. I talked to him about things that I was feeling; about things that happened. Once again Patch has that look about him that made me think that he understood everything that I was saying.

    After a while I went home and went to bed. When I woke up the next morning, I was sorer then the day before. I could hardly move. I figured that it was because everything had time to settle and form. My shower did more harm then good. The water streaming down and crashing against my skin was causing me agony. I finished up as fast as I could. Then got dressed and headed down stairs.

    I expected to find dad and everything else eating at the table. But only Tristan was there. I said nothing to him. When I walked into the room. I got a drink of OJ, and got some pop tarts. Then I headed out the door. The less that we say to each other the better. I was walking down the side walk, when I head someone running up behind me. I turned around to see who it was. It was Tristan.

    “Just Great”

    “Wait up fag.”

    “What the hell do you want?”

    “What, I can’t walk to school with my favorite brother?”

    “Half brother, and no you can’t. We hate each other.”

    “Good then I can’t feel bad for doing this.” He pushed me down then kicked me in the stomach twice. He walked away laughing. When I finally got my breather back, I yelled a curse at him. Then I t stood back up and made my way to school.

    All my classes changed, except my 6th hour math class. When I got to the room and I walked in, there was only one desk left. I almost dropped dead when I saw who was sitting next to that one desk.
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    There is chapter 4, it was really hard for me to write. i tried using a voice reconition program but it sucked. i dont know when the next one will be out.
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    Tim,
    Thanks for trying to march on with your main arm in a sling. It was a good installment. We used to hang at our local Pizza Hut, too. Back then, they liked putting glass windows as corners on the building. The parking configuration wasn't the best - I remember "kissing" the corner window one night -- you can guess the rest! New glass and poles installed!

    I can't imagine who is sitting next to the only available seat - perhaps his half-brother?

    Thanks for all the time and effort you've put into this story - especially as a "gimp".


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    I was thinking Brad also but who knows.... It may be king kong or godzilla if tim wanted it to be. LOL

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    Tim,
    I just began reading your story tonight. Wow! It's powerful and yet heart wrenching. I hope that you are coming along with your arm. I remember breaking my right arm in the summer when I was 19. I couldn't do much of anything. Just concentrate on your health, and when that's fine, then continue this very interesting story.


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    Im glad that you like it. Im doing better, thnx to pain pills. Im still not ready to drive. that may take some time. Something about being a in a car that rolls twice, makes you a little scarred.

    My arm still hurts, but it is getting better. i guess the pain tells me that im still alive.

    Zach is going to be doing the writing for me. I will speak and he will write. the typing i will still do. im getting pretty good and going with one hand. and that is the time when i edit. We have alrdy started the next part. this is one of the things that is helping me keep my mind off the pain. i dont wana become dependant on the damned pills. lol
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    I'm thinking it will be the guy he was staring at during James' birthday party.

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    The Tide Began to Rise
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    ~ All my classes changed, except my 6th hour math class. When I got to the room and I walked in, there was only one desk left. I almost dropped dead when I saw who was sitting next to that one desk. ~

    I stood in the doorway. What should I be feeling? Should I be happy and joyful that I am going to be sitting next to him, or should I be feeling horrified? At this moment it is the latter. I couldn’t move. I couldn’t breathe. Then came the voice. Somehow I recognized it. Then I realized whose voice it was. It was Mr. Snodgrass.

    “Mr. Cox, will you be so kind a take the remaining seat next to Mr. Macomb.”

    “Huh…………………ok, yeah, sure.”

    I slowly made my way back to the desk. I tried my best not to stare at Brent, but he is just so good looking. I sat down and just looked straight forward. When I wasn’t looking at him, he was on my mind.

    “OK class, we are going to go ahead and jump right in. We are going to take a short quiz to see what you all remember. Based on what questions everyone gets right and wrong, will determine where we will start. If only a few people miss a question we won’t spend any time on it. I will find another way to help those people understand that.” Said Mr. Snodgrass.

    He went to his desk and grabbed the stack of quizzes. He walked around the room and placed one on everyone desk. As he passed them out, he told us that we may begin as soon as we get ours. When he handed me mine, I looked it over. I knew everything on it. I was expecting to at least get some questions on stuff I didn’t know.

    I worked through each problem at a steady pace. Some problems were easier than others. When I was done I raised my hand and Snodgrass came to my desk and picked up my quiz. I was the 1st to finish.

    He took the quiz back to his desk and graded it. I looked over and saw Brent was struggling. I looked at his paper and saw that he was only on the third problem. The wheels in my head began to turn. “This could be my way to talk to him.” As I watched him work, I noticed that either was not trying or he was trying and was getting all the answers wrong.

    That bell rang to signal class was over. Brent was still working. I thought, tomorrow when we get the quiz back I will offer to tutor him.

    The rest of the day was boring. My last two classes had both brie and Brad in them. That was pretty cool. Now I have some people to goof off with. Yeah I know, I should be paying attention, but it is so hard sometimes.

    I decided not to go anywhere after school today. My dad was pissed that I did yesterday. How dare I have a life outside of serving him! I went home and did my normal chores. I did the dishes, cleaned up the living room, did the laundry, and vacuumed the entire house. As I did my normal cleaning, if I saw anything that was messy, I would clean it up. The entire time I was cleaning, both Tristan and Peter were mocking me. Tristan would dirty something just so I would have to extra work to do.

    My mom made dinner, and for the first time in a long time, I ate with the family. For a moment I felt like a member of the family, and not the miss treated maid.

    Of course, after dinner I had to clean up. Then I went to my room and waited for midnight. I went down to the alley and fed Patch. I told him my plan. When I did his tail began to wag really fast. I figured that was his way of telling me that he liked my idea. After a while I told him good night and headed home.

    I woke up the next morning with a sense of something that I didn’t recognize. I was excited. I was looking forward to math class. I went to the bath room and got in the shower. I began to rub and tug on my cock. I had to masturbate to the image of Brent naked. I have seen that once, but that image is burned into my cornea.

    When I was done, I went and got dressed. I headed for school. My dad was home this morning and I didn’t want to have to deal with him until I had to.

    When I got to school, I went straight to the cafeteria to get some food. I was starving by the time that I got there. While I was eating Brad showed up. He got some food and joined me.

    “Tyler, homie, how’s it going?”

    “Pretty good. It’s only the third day of school, so it can’t be all bad yet.”

    “Yeah that’s true. Wana hang out after school? We can go back to my place and play video games.”

    “That sounds like fun. I will have to ask my dad though.”

    “Ok that’s cool.”

    As brad finished speaking the bell rang. We both said later to each other and we went our separate ways. Of course I was getting homework in each of my classes. It’s Friday, so naturally all of the teachers have to try and ruin our weekend. When lunch came around, I decided to just get some ala carte and get as much of the work done as possible. My friends sat around me and talked. They would periodically call me a nerd then go back to what they were talking about.

    The bell rang and Brad and I went to math class. We got there got there pretty early. So we got two seats in the back. Brent came in shortly after us and sat next to me. “Oh my god, oh my god. Two days in a row.” I thought to myself. Mr. Snodgrass came in and took attendance.

    “OK class; to make this attendance thing a lot easier for me, I am going to have a seating chart. Now I can either assign the seats myself, or we can stay in these seats. What do you think?”

    Everyone looked around them, then almost in unison; the entire class said “stay in these seats.”

    “Ok sounds good to me……………..I’m going to hand back your quizzes. I wrote notes on some of them. Be sure to look for those. While I’m giving these back, I will pass around a seating chart. Write your name so that I can read it, in the seat that you are sitting in right now.”

    He passed the seating chart around while he called out each person’s name to give them back their quiz. When I got mine back, I saw that I had gotten a 100% on it. There was also a note that said “Good Job, You’re the only one to get them all right.”

    Once all the quizzes were out, we started with the lesson. I didn’t pay much attention. I really didn’t need to. When the bell rang, Snodgrass called out what our homework was. Then he asked if Mr. Macomb would stay after for a moment. When I heard that, I “accidentally” dumped my bag on the floor. I started cleaning up. Brent went up to Mr. Snodgrass desk.

    “What did you want me to stay for?”

    “It’s about your quiz. You got none of the questions right. So I need to figure out a way to help you understand this stuff. I don’t want to, but I think that it will come to keeping you after school.

    “What? No, I’m not going to stay after school to learn math.”

    “If I recommend that you should; then you will.”

    “There has to be another way.”

    When I heard that I perked up.

    “Mr. Snodgrass” I said.

    “Oh Tyler, right? What are you still doing here?”

    “I had to pick up my stuff………I can help Brent with math. I got a 100 on the quiz. I’m more then willing to help him, if that’s ok with him.”

    “What do you say to that Brent?” Asked Snodgrass

    “Defiantly…..I mean……..er…………..as long as I don’t have to stay after school to learn this crap.”

    “Ok then, I will let you two set it up. As long as I see an improvement, you won’t have to stay after. Now here is a pass for you next class.”

    He filled out a pass and handed it to Brent. I waited for mine.

    “Tyler, I was wondering if we could talk for a minute?”

    Shit. I know where this is going, and I don’t like it. How am I going to get out of this?
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!! I think this was the most touching chapter yet!!!!!!! Brought tears to my eyes hehe!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Love the JO scene btw hehe!!!!!!


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    nervous
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    Wow, what a guess I was right, it was the guy he was staring at!

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    Another day in the life - but maybe getting better?

    Things seem to ge looking up, depending on what the final question is about.

    Thanks for working on you story while your wing is busted.
    Looking forward to your next installment.

    Brent - remember, Math CAN be fun! Really. It's all in the "manual" pieces you use to help you.


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    The little jack off made it seem so real.

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    LOL im cripled right now and im not doing the writing. so bite me....lol and yeah the JO part in there made it a little more real. but i dont want it to turn into a sex sex sex nothing but sex story. I mean i kind like to read those, but i like the ones that have a story behind the sex or that the sex sences help make the story flow but that they are not the main focus.

    Actually i went to the doctor today and i got my cast off, so now i can write and type better. it still hurts but i have a brace on it right now. but i have usage out of my arm. now i can jack off again. lol it has been 3 weeks since i could or since i have been in the mood to do anything. lol. but it is soon coming that time. maybe tonight.

    I will see if i can make this next chapter a little longer. but when i get a good cliff hanger i stop it. then i start the next chatper from there. that keeps ppl reading it.
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    I have read your story and it is good, and i read Kevins and i love it. and i like how i write so there ha....Just becuase u are sexy dont mean that i have to listen to you. and i know it was a short chapter. They lowered the dose on my pain meds and i was not feeling to well.....so sue me.

    And i love you to Cody. but not as much as i love brock
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    NO, u dont get zach i get to keep both. lol and im not scared of u. Zach will protect me. lol

    I dont HAVE to listen to anyone. im an adult and i can do what ever and who ever i want. lol. bigger as in tall maybe. but where it counts that is yet to be proven. lol
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    OOOOOOo....sounds like fun. and i still aint scared of u. but i like the sound of being your bitch. but NOBODY gets zach's ass but me.
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    talk talk talk. lol. im the first and only for him. thats how it will stay. no matter how cute and sexy u both are.
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    pity huh, when just for that i will make each chapter from here on out one parachgraph
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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    no comment, but zach will make one on that
    "If I have to choose between loving you, and breathing. I would use my last breath to say I LOVE YOU."

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