I havent read anything in the story section in quite a while. But I saw your name in the authors and thought of that globe jig saw puzzle you have been working on and wondered just how many talents you have. so I read your story. You do an excellent job with all of the grammar, quotation marks and such but an even better job at building your characters and scenes. I really felt like I knew the people you were writing about. In the beginning Jason was kinda Sylvester Stylone but I kept wanting him to have a soft loving side which you did give us.
I am pretty vanilla at sex. It always surprises me when people have 5 orgasms in a row, never have sore jaws and always seem to know exactly how to perform sexual acts. So some spots in the story were hard for me to associate with but some challanged me to be more like the heroes. I talked with my bf about the long blow jobs etc and he thinks we ought to try more stuff which I always do when he has an idea or fantasy that he wants to fulfill.
So keep inspiring us, taking those little turns in the stream like the piss stuff and having the 3 some. Dont know if we will go there but we try to think of trying things like pissing in the shower where it can be like in jest but not to humiliate and because it will get washed off right away.
Anyway I am impressed by your work and wanted to thank you. I especially liked using grandpas land with the stream etc tho I kept expecting someone to chance upon them. And the tolerance of the college kids seemed a little more accepting then any college I have attended. Yada Yada...