Welcome to JUB! Great to have You aboard!
However, Buddy ... I know how much work has gone into Neil's stories, and even the proof reading done by another JUBber. And, though You are Right, as Neil has pointed out, in the "heat of the moment", there are some MINOR things that can slip through.
Some might seem that pointing those little bits out could be considered "nit picking".
Is grammar Important? Yes, it is!
Butt (And, yes, I wrote it that way on purpose ), there can also be such a thing as "splitting hairs", and not seeing the Forest for the Trees!
I hope You can understand that You're pointing those "niggley" bits out, though commendable, can also be taken as Excessive, and overly "persnickety".
All I'm trying to say is, though You're motives are certainly Positive, and as well meant as You're intentions may be, given the overall writing that You're criticizing, the advice You're offering may not be all that appreciated.
That doesn't mean "We" don't like YOU, though!
Just more reasons to ... No Matter What ...