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    Hi, slaght.

    Welcome to JUB! Great to have You aboard!

    However, Buddy ... I know how much work has gone into Neil's stories, and even the proof reading done by another JUBber. And, though You are Right, as Neil has pointed out, in the "heat of the moment", there are some MINOR things that can slip through.

    Some might seem that pointing those little bits out could be considered "nit picking".

    Is grammar Important? Yes, it is!

    Butt (And, yes, I wrote it that way on purpose ), there can also be such a thing as "splitting hairs", and not seeing the Forest for the Trees!

    I hope You can understand that You're pointing those "niggley" bits out, though commendable, can also be taken as Excessive, and overly "persnickety".

    All I'm trying to say is, though You're motives are certainly Positive, and as well meant as You're intentions may be, given the overall writing that You're criticizing, the advice You're offering may not be all that appreciated.

    That doesn't mean "We" don't like YOU, though!

    Just more reasons to ... No Matter What ...

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    Our Chaz, always the diplomat.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Very well said Chaz ..........No matter What

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    I've been a reader of this story since early on and I've been a writer even longer. I find it rude to criticize the grammar in any part of the story. First and foremost, this is told from Ted's point of view and Ted just happens to use "I" when he should use "me". He's a human being (albeit fictional) and, as human beings, we are prone to make simple mistakes when speaking. Just be glad he says, "Brad and I" and not "Me and Brad". I'm thinking that if that were the case, your head would explode.

    To put it as simply as I can, however, I would just close with, "Just enjoy the story, grammar errors and all, and GET OVER YOUR CHEAP SELF. MY characters don't always use proper grammar and neither do I.

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    Quote Originally Posted by gsdx View Post
    Thanks again, everyone. I wrote Part VI today. I'll proof it in the morning and post it.

    As for the 'Canadian Content', and_rew, I needed specifics with this one. I knew Brad was in university, and I knew it would be needed. I had to pick a university I knew and the areas around it, so I picked Ryerson. I'm glad I did. It let me bring in the CN Tower, which proved (and will prove in the next Part) a very valuable location and adventure.

    I just hope there's a Tim Horton's off the 401 in Pickering. They're everywhere, so I think it's a pretty safe bet.
    Well, the other thread brought me here. "I'm lovin' it!" so far. No, wait, that's a different chain that serves coffee, isn't it?

    And enjoying the Canadian content as well, with enough of a frame of reference to visualise what's going on. I had to know something about Toronto to visualise you going on Bloor, later on Yonge, to have the fleeting thought "What are they doing THERE?" when turning right (southwest) on Front.

    This is the first time in years that I've read a novel (or anything close to it).
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    Frank Frank,
    Welcome to one of the greatest pieces of literature on JUB.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    gsdx, what have you done?

    I'm SUPPOSED to be working on some timely administrative shit. Now I can't put this down, and I note this thread has 24 times as many pages as I've just finished (at Chapter XIV).

    Ive been alive considerably longer than you, and this may be the best thing I have ever read. I'm serious.
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    WARNING SIGNS AND FLAGS COMING UP...I see some posts in the 3320's asking about another installment coming. Am I reading something that doesn't have any resolution? Uh-oh.
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    Frank,
    Neil has slowed considerably in his story writing due to his chronic pain.
    You have a long way to go to get to where the story currently lies.

    And, I somehow don't think you are *considerably* older than Neil.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Doing the math, I'm somewhere between 6 to 8 years older, I think.

    I just like those little random touches that he throws in once in a while...
    We abandoned the near-full beer bottles and left them to spend the rest of the night on the stone wall, pointing silently into the night sky.
    I'll have to get back to work, and anyway my mind has to keep up with the character development and all, I can't be too hasty.
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    Quote Originally Posted by frankfrank View Post
    Well, the other thread brought me here. "I'm lovin' it!" so far. No, wait, that's a different chain that serves coffee, isn't it?

    And enjoying the Canadian content as well, with enough of a frame of reference to visualise what's going on. I had to know something about Toronto to visualise you going on Bloor, later on Yonge, to have the fleeting thought "What are they doing THERE?" when turning right (southwest) on Front.

    This is the first time in years that I've read a novel (or anything close to it).
    You won't be disappointed with the story line, Frank. It's a great read.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Davelandia View Post
    Neil -

    I just found this story and read it from its start up till this point, laughing and crying as I'm sure so many others have.

    I hope that Brad and Ted and all the other important people in their lives are with us for a long time to come. I wish I could know them all personally - this is at least the next best thing. Thank you for bringing them into our lives.

    You have a gift and I thank you so much for sharing it with us.
    QFT. *raises and waves hand frantically*

    I love some of your characters more than I've loved some of my better friends in real life. Wow, just wow.

    Quote Originally Posted by HaydenLogan View Post
    Totally agree with Sheep on this one Hardon killer.

    I like the joke with Brad's ball KO'ing people,
    I'm absolutely 100% gay, and I love that you included the lesbian aspects in here as well. After all, they're just people - oh wait, no they aren't, they're FICTION - "OH, FRANKFRANK, SHUT UP!" - no, lesbian activities will NEVER be hard-on bait for me, it doesn't do a thing whatsoever for me, it's just NEUTRAL. I'm glad they're part of my life, as I continue reading this.

    Quote Originally Posted by Kyanimal View Post
    AWE-SOME!!!!

    Neil, Dude!

    You had me tearing up with Ted's Mom and Dad! But ... you've completely "floored" me with Brad and Ted at "The Falls"!
    I'm actually responding to this first, BEFORE THE OTHERS, in this queue. So that I can say this IN THE PRESENT: I've been shaking and quivering and crying since getting into the Niagara part. No reading has ever done this to me before. This story so far is the best story I have ever read, with no doubt. With the bases loaded, you smashed THIS one effortlessly sailing far over deep center field, over the bleachers, over the wall, all the way to the street.

    Quote Originally Posted by bhtupstateny View Post
    I did not find any of your "lezzie" content in any way shape or form a "hardon killer". Nowhere did you describe any sexual contact between these two people. Come on, we all exist. I don't see these two as intrusive neighbors - just really good friends that I wish I could have. Its a story, a well written story and I think Cali and Mags are wonderful people for Brad and Ted to have met.

    As always great additions to your story Neil!
    I'LL TELL YOU WHAT, GUYS...I am actually so happy that I'm reading this AFTER THE FACT. There are so many beautiful comments in this thread...and I CONSIDER THEM TO BE PART OF THE STORY. I just can't get myself outta this place...

    gsdx, was the inside of Neil's place something like your space was IRL in 2006?

    I've had utmost respect for you for years, and this story certainly adds to it.
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    Neil,
    The line was played out and the hook properly set on another devoted fan.

    Frank - just remember - the REAL date is 26 October. Pay no attention to the August(?) date.
    (All will be made clear later, lol)


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Quote Originally Posted by gsdx View Post
    WATCHING BRAD
    Part XXXIII
    The first single note, low on the keyboard, filled the room. It was slow and played with a great amount of emotion. The chord that followed told me immediately what the melody was. There was no mistaking it. Eric Satie. Gymnopedie No. 1. A second single note sounded lower on the keyboard, then the chord again. He repeated this, and then Brad's right hand began taking up the main theme. It was beautifully haunting in its simpleness and I sat there in absolute awe as I listened to him play. His fingers moved smoothly over the keys.

    I've heard this tune hundreds of times. I knew it by heart.
    My God, Neil! YOU HAVE NO IDEA...

    The story is far too long to go into here, but this tune was entirely integral to me making the most unexpected and incongruous connection between two entirely unrelated things - what I consider the most bizarre thing that has ever happened to me. This is something that happened in the middle of September 2013...when somebody sent me a link to a video of that composition on YouTube.

    The guy who sent it to me is indeed a central part of the entirely surreal and astonishing connection that was made that day, and if not for the link he sent me to that song, the connection would have never happened. It's not the kind of connection that led me to somebody I hadn't seen in decades or anything like that, but it was so entirely bizarre (and pleasant).

    And you unknowingly put it right in front of me.

    Wow...so your Ted was a fan of BRAVE NEW WAVES!!!!! That's the only way I can easily imagine that he heard it hundreds of times. After going totally-wild-and-crazy during their first two hours, Gymnopedie 1 closed out the third and final hour. I had access to satellite radio (not the "car kind" but the old-school kind where you needed a massive backyard dish to pick it up yourself, unofficially), and I was glued to that show when Brent Bambury hosted it on CBC Radio 2.

    And the bolded part...YES, that is so entirely true! It's one of the most impressive compositions, one for the Ages...and there isn't even "much to it" at all.
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    Quote Originally Posted by gsdx View Post
    They leaned away from me at the same moment and looked at me.

    "Are you our new Daddy?" Justin asked.

    I lost it.

    BAM!

    Gadz, I was quivering and crying again...just not now because I couldn't get rid of the quote queue and it wouldn't let me quote this Part XXXX (as some clock faces also way; or XL) right away without massaging and manoeuvring the links, etc.

    I'm SUPPOSED to be getting other stuff done. DARN you, Neil.

    I've never been so drawn into a story before. What happened years ago when I picked up Orwell's "1984" and couldn't put it down, was nothing like this...

    I guess the closest was the "undying love for my best friend" thread that LostVegas had here, a few years back.
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    Quote Originally Posted by frankfrank View Post
    BAM!

    Gadz, I was quivering and crying again...just not now because I couldn't get rid of the quote queue and it wouldn't let me quote this Part XXXX (as some clock faces also way; or XL) right away without massaging and manoeuvring the links, etc.

    I'm SUPPOSED to be getting other stuff done. DARN you, Neil.

    I've never been so drawn into a story before. What happened years ago when I picked up Orwell's "1984" and couldn't put it down, was nothing like this...

    I guess the closest was the "undying love for my best friend" thread that LostVegas had here, a few years back.
    I have had my ups and downs with the story, and it is very addictive read.

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    Quote Originally Posted by frankfrank View Post
    gsdx, was the inside of Neil's place something like your space was IRL in 2006?
    Indeed it was, Frank, and it still is. In fact, if one were carefully to follow the directions Ted drove to get you my place, you'd know almost precisely where I live. The description was my home, from the sidewalk to the steps to the hallway and inside. Even the reading material which Lindsay discovered in the bathroom was real.

    Ted gets his love of classical music from me. I've always loved it, and the only radio station I've listened to for the past 30 years or more is a 24-hour classical music station (which, if anyone is interested, can be streamed live through the link). The pieces which Ted loves are the ones I love to listen to. That's the closest Ted comes to me.

    Still, I thank you for your praise. I'm humbled by it. It isn't the reason I write. I write for my pleasure and (the collective) your entertainment.

    Happy reading.

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    PS - I'm 63. It's not a secret around here.

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    Kyanimal, "the name's Dad" got me too. More than EIGHT YEARS after it got you.

    "I've never made loose tea before," he said. "I hope it's okay."

    Mom took the cup offered to her and took a hesitant sip. She smiled up at Brad. "It's delicious," she said with a polite cringe. "Tomorrow, I'll show you how to make it less crunchy."
    Boys and tools and heavy equipment. I think it's genetic.
    Where do you come up with this stuff?
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    A note near the top of the email alerts that I'm sending out to nearly 500 customers later today, includes:

    "I thought I'd do this Sunday. I got hopelessly buried in a fiction novel." (as in I HAD PLANNED TO DO IT TWO DAYS AGO...not that I was going to wait until this coming Sunday, LOL)

    It's that time of the year, and my annual biggie always comes out in January.

    I've been doing other things, but...wow, just wow...what CAN I say?

    As Lawrence Welk used to say...Wun'erful, Wun'erful!
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    Frank,
    It's so much fun enjoying the snippets of the story through a new reader's eyes.

    Makes me want to go back and re-read it all over again - which I should.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Wow, the chips did really fall in Part 85...then took on a life of their own once they hit the floor. Your Muse has no bounds at all. I sat there and sat there until I had to pick up the spatula to scoop my jaw off the floor.

    Quote Originally Posted by gayemtinpa View Post
    I've never been so into reading anything in all my 39 and a half years of life!!! Nothing has ever brought as much emotion to me, in reading. Reading this story makes me hope that one day I will find as much happiness as these two men share!!!!

    Thank you so much Neil!!!!

    Sincerely,
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    I certainly can't reply to this guy, as he's probably been gone so long that he probably no longer lurks here, either. But, change his number by ALMOST adding Ted's age to it. In my SIXTY SEVEN and a half years, which comes on 06 February, this is truly the best novel I have ever read. No contest.

    "Are you our new Daddy?" Justin asked.
    I read some of the posts above this one, and the waterworks started again. All of this, even before considering the extra-special circumstances involved, which I vividly remember. Maybe the most powerful quote of the whole story so far, and there's a LOT of competition there.
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    Quote Originally Posted by frankfrank View Post
    I read some of the posts above this one, and the waterworks started again. All of this, even before considering the extra-special circumstances involved, which I vividly remember. Maybe the most powerful quote of the whole story so far, and there's a LOT of competition there.
    Believe it or not, Frank, there are some scenes (including that one) where I had to walk away from the keyboard just to calm myself down long enough to sit back down and finish it. I don't know if this goes for a lot of writers, but I usually know how the readers will react when reading it by my own reactions to writing it.

    By the way, I'm glad you enjoyed the 'crunchy tea' bit. Where do I come up with them? I usually don't. Most times they just sneak up on me and jump out of my fingers onto the keyboard when the time is right.

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    hey, neil. it gives me some hope to see you posting on here again. I know you have your own issues to manage, but I hope some more chapters could be coming soon for this story. I love it so much. may actually start my 3rd read-through on it soon.

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    Frank,
    It is so much fun watching you enjoy this story.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Reading this years after the fact, I didn't have to wait from Friday...to Monday...to Wednesday during that torturous stretch of days in late summer 2006. And writing in Ted's nightmare IN THE SAME CHAPTER as J&J screaming and being torn away in the end, was one helluva devious dastardly trick...one of the MASTERPIECES of trickery. Even though the Judge hadn't made his decision yet, I think that the deja vu aspect of that ending tricked most or all of us into thinking that denial of adoption was a Done Deal!! It 100.000000% seemed like something that it wasn't at all.

    You are a Grand Master.

    And what a twist for Jerry to disobey and keep the file, and have it in the courtroom. Most authors would have simply forgotten that it existed.

    "We don't need them anymore," Justin replied.
    Another place that brought on the waterworks. You do know how to make grown men cry - in the best possible way.

    Something tells me that, at some point before I am finally caught up to the most current, the Teddy bears will make ONE cameo appearance...for some reason.
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    Oh thank you DonQuixote...and wasn't it YOUR LINK in another thread that got me here? IT'S YOUR FAULT.

    In more than nine years here, I don't even think I ever visited this Forum even once, before.

    I can no longer properly claim that I spend more than 99% of all my JUB time between two Forums (Hot Topics, C E & P).

    And a romance novel, and a family, and all that mushy stuff? I don't "do" that genre...
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    Quote Originally Posted by frankfrank View Post
    And what a twist for Jerry to disobey and keep the file, and have it in the courtroom. Most authors would have simply forgotten that it existed.
    Actually, I have forgotten. Except for proofreading for spelling and such, I've never read what I write. I don't even remember what Jerry was investigating let alone what file you're talking about. Would this emoticon be appropriate here?

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    I may comment on your comments, but nothing you say will change the future. It has already been decided.
    Unless it's Cali and Mags, of course.

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    This story has, I suppose, become the life I would have liked to have had.
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    the characters in your story are so real, that you ARE having that life, to a degree - as they love you back, after you gave THEM life...and so much love. As I haven't peeked ahead to get even a slight hint of what kind of reading I have coming up (I'll resume on Post #881, Part 94, when I next come here), it's whatever perspective of present and past tense, which I can't know yet.

    Quote Originally Posted by JayboyCDA View Post
    It took me almost 2 weeks reading your story from the beginning to now. It's like i've been invited to Ted and Brad's life and that I have known them all these times. I've told my friends of my new addiction and they just shake their heads. At first, I really found the sex stuff really interesting. As the story progressed, I skipped the sex part and went on to read about their life. Don't get me wrong as the sex part is really REALLY hot, but I see Ted and Brad and their kids more as people and I care very deeply about them. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
    Seeing the CDA, are you the same guy who had a number in his username until recently, and now has an "x" in it? Entire post is seconded, and approved with Ayes around the room. I am now as likely as not to skim through the sex part, as hot as it is, likewise. The sex part is suitably balanced with all other aspects of the relationship and the family/families involved.
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    Quote Originally Posted by gsdx View Post
    Actually, I have forgotten. Except for proofreading for spelling and such, I've never read what I write. I don't even remember what Jerry was investigating let alone what file you're talking about. Would this emoticon be appropriate here?
    You STILL haven't read what you wrote? Wow. You or somebody else suggested you doing so in 2006. (I'm through Post #880 now) This was the file when Ted had Jerry do some P. I. work on the background of the twins, and the background about the twins in the playpen being able to reach out and touch their dead father, which resulted in them not talking until Justin's "Are you our new Daddy?" moment, and other things. Ted looked at it and told Jerry to destroy the file, because he never wanted to see it again. In a twist, which you are capable of, the not-destroyed file came to be preeminently important, and it was brought to the right place at the right time...very important to the adoption approval.
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    ^ Thanks for that. I suppose I really should go back and read it, but I'd be so afraid I'd be my own worst critic and hate what I was reading.

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    neil, you have nothing to worry about. the story is wonderful. I was like frank, found it near the most recent chapter, then started binge reading. would read this story for 4-5 hours a night, until I caught up. then once I was done, took a break, then started over. and I'm seriously considering reading it a 3rd time.

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    I finished Post #1490, just before Part 132 starts. I copied the link to Post #1491 (where 132 starts), I pasted it into an email I wrote to myself...so I can quickly resume exactly where I left off. JUB navigation otherwise gives no easy way to get to Page 75 (my settings 20 posts per page).

    Neil, people can learn real life-lessons from your fictional epic. You have a GREAT sense of "social consequences" of both good and bad actions by people, not to mention when Ted went to the psychiatrist during his near-breakdown and the results were so positive for everybody involved (as of the point where I've paused). You've shown a great example of why there is NOT ANY SHAME, not at all, in deciding to go to a psychiatrist. Though it didn't last for long (and thank God he didn't get Baker Acted like he might have in Florida...or similarly railroaded in some other U. S. states), his benefits from going to the psychiatrist were incalculable. Of course, he also "got lucky" - he ended up with a shrink who really knew what he was doing. That can be guaranteed no more than getting a great and conscientious car mechanic, accountant, landscaper, or au pair. (As for the last two, Ted has some good part-time ones right THERE.)

    Uh-oh. FRENCH. I'm turning into Warren. NOOOOOOOO!!!!

    No, wait, maybe that's a good thing. LOL

    Ya know what else impresses the hell out of me? You have gotten comments from A LOT of people who decided to use their very FIRST JUB-posts in this thread. There can possibly be no greater proof of the power of your story than that...unless perhaps there is somebody saved from suicide in the next 1,900 posts, or a relationship is saved, or something similarly major.

    I assume it has happened, even if we don't hear about it.

    This is still the greatest story I've read in my lifetime.
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    ^ Or, just bookmark the link. Then you can delete it and make a new bookmark next time.

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    Yeah, true. but doing this keeps it out of the bookmarks clutter.
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    I pulled open the bottommost drawers. There were their Teddy bears, right where they had put them when they didn't need them anymore.

    But I did.
    I knew they would make a cameo appearance, didn't I? But I thought it would be for one or both of the twins.

    Wow. What more can I say. (I'm posting this now, looking at Post #1560 just above...)

    I just realized my comments on the story best be nebulous and nonspecific, lest they be some kind of spoiler. More people will still find this story.
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    gsdx, is that BRAD in your avatar?

    No, guess not. It's more than just a CHIPPED tooth.
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    LoL.

    Frank, that is one of the British Actors from "Are You Being Served", a comedy based in one of the upscale London Department Stores. It was/is part of the BBC in America offerings from the 70's or 80's. They did a sequel series "Are you being served, again", where the cast members are all retired and at the company retirement home - where they wind up having to keep a working farm in business, IIRC. The series was full of double entendre with Neil's Avatar as Gay as they came.


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    Quote Originally Posted by DonQuixote View Post
    a comedy based in one of the upscale London Department Stores.
    'Upscale'! Now that's funny!

    Seriously, though, it was set in the 70s, but their clothing was stuck in the 50s and 60s. That's where most of the humour came from - the staff of Grace Brothers trying to sell stuff 20 years out of date.

    The second series called 'Grace and Favour' in England was renamed 'Are You Being Served? Again!' in North America. That came about after the last of the store's owners, Young Mr. Grace died and left a hotel to the retired staff of Grace Brothers: Mrs. Slocombe, Captain Peacock, Mr. Rumbold, Miss Brahms, and Wilberforce Clayborne Humprhies (the guy in my avatar).

    Humphries was portrayed by John Inman, who was gay. Mr. Humphries' sexuality was never 'nailed down'. Creator and writer David Lloyd stated that Humphries was just a 'mother's boy'. In 'Grace and Favour', he was described as neither a 'woman's man' nor a 'man's man'. He was merely 'in limbo'. I'm sure he was still a virgin.

    Just some info from an AYBS? fan.

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    We need a GSDX Appreciation Thread for you to post all of your stuff in!


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    Quoting "necro-posts" from more than seven years ago:

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    So the much-awaited wedding of the millenium is now officially over and Brad is now a de Villiers Hayes. I'm glad it went off without a hitch
    No, there WAS a hitch! Ted and Brad got hitched!!

    Quote Originally Posted by gsdx View Post
    I hope this brought a satisfying conclusion to Connie. It had never been my intention to bring her back into the story, and I really had no idea what was going to happen with her when I brought her back.
    I liked the way that she said goodbye, and proved that there was after all some humanity left in her cold heart. Her tears, when Ted told her he's happier with Brad than he was with her, were probably her own lament for "what could have been" for her.

    Tear time, and laugh time, again!!! Yes, you-dun-it again Neil!

    This is still the best story I have ever read (nothing else even in the same universe)...and certainly, by far, the longest. Really long...as in Old Testament long, or something...I never expected to tackle anything like this. Ever.

    And I can STILL keep track of the characters! That NEVER happens.
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    And I can STILL keep track of the characters! That NEVER happens.
    Good. You can keep notes for me, then.

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    LoL

    Love it, Neil. I can relate, though.


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    ^ I remember when Connie came back. She was never supposed to and I had forgotten everything about her. I couldn't even remember what she looked like or how she talked. I knew her personality, but that was about it. When she was gone, she was supposed to be gone for good. I had to go back and search her name chapter by chapter to find out who she was (so to speak). And when she did come back, I had no idea what she was going to do. That was one of the situations which just fell out of my fingers, onto the keyboard, and into the story.

    Please don't ask for a reappearance.

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    What about the Lesbians - I loved them. I know you said you got a lot of flack from some people about them.


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    If they do, it will be only cameo appearances or casual mentions. A lot of readers didn't take kindly to them, either in this thread or in PMs. I couldn't create two males to replace them character-wise, so I created Barry and Nathan instead.

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    Great story. Looking forward to reading more. Thanks

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    [written May 19, 2007]
    The wedding rehearsal went surprisingly well. Nathan was there, taking notes and helping to coordinate everything. He had promised to make sure everything would run smoothly on Saturday afternoon. As I said earlier, we owed Nathan big time for this.
    Quote Originally Posted by gsdx View Post
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    Imagine our surprise when we were alerted to an Email from none other than ‘the other Clive Barker'. He was still in Canada, but would be heading back to London on Wednesday and didn't want to leave without knowing the full extent of the...
    You explained a few times that the timeline of the story started in the 2005, the year previous to when you started writing it, and that the story timeline would eventually catch up with the current timeline. Well, you weren't doing a very good job of catching the timeline up HERE, were you...about two weeks covered in this period? LOL.

    I've gotten this far, now! I'm still lovin' it! I haven't seen anybody mention it yet, but there are a lot of life-lessons that can be learned from your story. The rewards of "being a good person" towards those of us who enter our lives, and who share this planet, come out well. You have presented quandaries that many of us encounter at one time or another, and your characters have dealt with them with grace and great skill, even when situations looked hopeless. Connie's appearance at the reception showed her full realization (without even a long description) of what she could have had, and the consequences of throwing it all away.

    Most recently, from my perspective of where I've read so far, a good example is Dan Phillips, the father of Lindsay's first boyfriend Daniel. He seemed so terribly recalcitrant and hopeless about the "fag" issue, and yet Ted was able to win him over and convince him to go to the party and let the kids have a nice day from it, and...it was entirely believable. Teddy-did-good. In a similar situation, I could have never managed that, but he was doing it for Lindsay AND the twins.

    This is still the best writing that I've ever read...anywhere.

    You have the skill, too, to find a way to inject humor in a very tasteful way, often at a time when we least expect it.

    With fewer than 1,000 posts to read, I know I'm catching up. Good thing, too. I've not been getting some things done that should be getting done.
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    Quote Originally Posted by frankfrank View Post
    You explained a few times that the timeline of the story started in the 2005, the year previous to when you started writing it, and that the story timeline would eventually catch up with the current timeline. Well, you weren't doing a very good job of catching the timeline up HERE, were you...about two weeks covered in this period? LOL.
    That was the original plan. The story became really big really fast and converging timelines took a back seat. I blame it on the cliff-hangers.

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    Are you sure it wasn't the hot sex scenes that distracted you? They weren't every chapter, but they were memorable.


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    We both knew, though, that Vic was nothing more than a bit of eye candy for David, just like Barry was eye candy to me and Brad was eye candy to Nathan. There was a huge chasm between ‘lust' and ‘love'. Unfortunately, there were a few bridges of temptation crossing that chasm. Fortunately, though, there was an enormous toll we would have to pay if we wanted to get to the other side, and only the bravest would dare cross them. I don't think any of us had the guts.
    What a great metaphor! My mouth just hung open a while after that one. You're a master.

    We were supposed to be changing our clothes so I could wash them, but Brad said, "Hey. Now that we're naked. . ."

    He had a point. A minute or so later, I had a point, too. It was a lot of fun making them go away.
    Even in solitude, I laughed out loud, but good.
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