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    The Celebrity Challenge

    Hi guys, I write gay sex stories about celebs and post them on my blog Male Celeb Fanfiction. I've recently started my biggest and best story yet "The Celebrity Challenge". A story about a group of fourteen hot male celebs in a gay sex based reality competition. Some of the guys include; Chris Evans, Kellan Lutz, Henry Cavill, Joe Manganiello, the Hemsworth brothers and more. The first part of the story is already up on my blog and I've begun writing the second chapter.

    Here's a link: http://malecelebfanfiction.blogspot.com/

    I want this to be an interactive story so I'm asking readers to vote on the polls on my blog and give me feedback on the story, and I'll adjust the outcome of the events in the story accordingly. I'll post more info here if people are interested.

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    Re: The Celebrity Challenge

    Cool! I write (gay) sex stories (about celebs) too!

    Let's keep in contact!

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    Re: The Celebrity Challenge

    I'm not always big on fanfiction but I read part of it anyways so I'll give some feedback. The concept is great and there are a lot of interesting things about it like everything before they left the showroom and the end scene on the roof but it was way too long and it seems like it'll take you forever to write this. Surprisingly the sex scenes were the least interesting parts about it and there were way too many of them in a row.

    If this was a real show, i'd watch it for sure but when you read it, it's different especially if you only recognize half the people. Only half of them are well known actors and of the half that I do know, only about 3 of them really interest me so if you used all well known celebrities then more people would have more people they're into and it won't be trying to imagining a name they've never heard of before.

    I think if you continued this, you should cut it short and focus more on the sexual competitions and eliminations and not on the sex that happens in between. Fun sex games would sound like something interesting to read about. It's up to you though, it's your fan fiction, I just wanted to give you feedback in case you wanted it.
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    Re: The Celebrity Challenge

    Hot! But like pineapple said, way too many sex scenes in a row. Your focus should be on the actual games, but the occasional sex scene in between would be great too.

    I love the actors you've chosen. I recognize most of them (Sam Witwer and Chris Evans being my favs) and I can't wait to see the future pairings and games you have them do.

    Keep at it bud.
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    Re: The Celebrity Challenge

    Thanks for the feedback guys, I'll start explaining some of my choices with this story.

    I got the idea for this story from a previous story that someone was writing on Nifty, but unfortunately he didn't finish it. I hope that I can finish my story, and feedback will help me with that, so again; thanks.

    As for my choice in celeb men, the original story started out with an even amount of guys split into two teams; film and television. I wanted to do that too, and I had difficulty filling out the television team. It would have been easy to fill the team with half the cast of True Blood, but I didn't want any more than two guys from one ****** When I was thinking of hot guys on TV to put in my story I thought of the men of Spartacus and decided to use some of them even though they are'nt nearly as famous as most of the other guys. And again, it would have been easy to use half of the men on that ****** I chose actors that I personally find to be attractive and as it turned out there was a large number of Aussies in my selection.

    I did not intend for the first installment to be so long but I just kept writing those sex scenes untill by the end it was a huge length of writing. It's ironic because usually I find my writing to be too short. I'm now definitely going to shorten future installments.

    Again, I really appreciate the feedback so far and I hope more guys let me know what they think. I'd really like to hear more ideas and suggestions as to what kind of sexual situations you'd like to see the guys get into with each other. And Ihope more guys vote on the polls, the team television poll is being neglected.

    Bye for now.

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    Re: The Celebrity Challenge

    You're welcome, it's actually the entire TV team I'm unfamiliar with since I haven't watched any of those shows. I know of Ryan Kwanten and have seen a picture of the Liam Spartucus guy before and thought he was hot but don't remember what they look like until I see their picture again so I'm unable to imagine them in anything.

    I forgot that the first one kept switching between saying there were 12 of them and 14 of them. I think 12 is the correct number.

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    Re: The Celebrity Challenge

    Quote Originally Posted by pineapple View Post
    You're welcome, it's actually the entire TV team I'm unfamiliar with since I haven't watched any of those shows. I know of Ryan Kwanten and have seen a picture of the Liam Spartucus guy before and thought he was hot but don't remember what they look like until I see their picture again so I'm unable to imagine them in anything.

    I forgot that the first one kept switching between saying there were 12 of them and 14 of them. I think 12 is the correct number.
    12 was the original number of guys I had chosen and then I increased the amount to 14. I thought I had changed all mention of 12 to 14, I guess I'll have to go back and edit it.

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    Re: The Celebrity Challenge

    I'm almost finished writing the second installment, it'll be finished in the next couple of days. I'll post here when I put it on my blog.
    And just a heads up; it contains some Hemsworth incest.

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    Re: The Celebrity Challenge

    I just posted part 2 on my blog. I wrote about half of it before I started getting feedback on JUB, so I didn't get to fully address some of the critiques for this second installment. However this part is definitely shorter and I hope its more succinct. I really hope I get some good responses from the readers.
    Here's another link: http://malecelebfanfiction.blogspot.com/

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    Re: The Celebrity Challenge

    There's only 9 days left to vote on the polls on my blog. Not surprisingly Chris Evans has a run-away lead over the other guys of film. But on the television side the two True Blood hunks, Joe Manganiello and Ryan Kwanten, are tied with Stephen Amell not far behind. The results of the polls will help me know which guys to focus on more than other and which guys will be eliminated sooner than others.

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