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    some poetry...

    Enchantment (Crush)

    And when I fall

    I fall hard

    I fall deep

    deeper into him

    his eyes enchant

    spellbound I stray

    a silent call

    beckons me

    into his eyes

    into his arms

    into his heart

    please, let it be

    From this spell

    I don't want to be set free.


    Even when in sleep

    I can't let go

    he haunts me

    in my deepest dreams

    coming when I call

    upon my beckoning

    he envelops me

    his arms, strong arms

    surround me

    we gaze

    into each other,

    into the inifinities

    within each other's eyes...


    I feel myself drifting

    among the stars, the endless clouds

    I am yanked back

    back into His world

    as our bodies meld

    moving, undulating

    caught in this passionate dance

    until neither of us knows

    where one begins

    and the other ends

    oh no, let it not end

    let it never end

    Please let me live here

    in this dream

    don't let me fall again

    unless it's into him


    Love,
    Rick

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    Re: some poetry...

    Not sure if no one's interested in my poetry or not, but here's another

    Everything He Is, I Am Inside

    Sunkissed skin
    so hot it melts the sky
    every colour lighted
    like I'm high
    well I'm drifting on clouds baby
    because of you
    and the way you look

    Tattoo on your back
    intruiging design
    colours deep and oily
    like they're wet
    help me I'm getting wetter
    because of you
    and what you emanate

    Scar across your cheek
    what story does it tell
    how deep does it run
    like my heart
    it has depths for you to fathom
    because of you
    and what you do to me

    Three hours later
    staring at the ceiling
    panting, our breaths heavy
    like our bodies
    oh god I'll never forget
    because you're good
    and what you did was too

    Everything on you
    glows like a sunset
    golden creamy colour
    like your voice
    Wanna hear you scream again
    scream my name
    until the end of time.

    Love,
    Rick

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    Re: some poetry...

    Nice

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    Re: some poetry...

    thank you armastus! You're the first person to comment on these here !! O.O

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    Re: some poetry...

    I love the "Crush" poem. You've captured that emotion of being so deeply infatuated with someone beautifully!! We've all been there!! I felt those emotions as I read the words. Brilliant.

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    Re: some poetry...

    Quote Originally Posted by MrMojoRisin View Post
    I love the "Crush" poem. You've captured that emotion of being so deeply infatuated with someone beautifully!! We've all been there!! I felt those emotions as I read the words. Brilliant.
    thank you!

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    Re: some poetry...

    Adding some more poems here... a little more provocative? porn-ish? you decide

    S. E. X.

    his hands unfold

    revealing a galaxy

    of possibilities

    and endless desires

    his mouth opens

    but no words follow

    only an instrument

    of pure lust

    his lips upon me

    caressing, pushing, tasting

    we strip ourselves

    of the unnecessary layers

    His body flexes

    sliding against mine

    no time for thoughts

    only pure desire

    ***

    my gateway opens

    his rocket enters

    a wingless needle

    cutting through the galaxies

    rupturing brainwaves

    thought patterns colliding

    no more desire

    just pleasurable pain

    we are like animals

    grunting, groaning

    our bodies melting

    our minds moaning:

    ***

    More! More! More!

    ***

    Our skin tingles

    his sword unsheathing

    although I'm cut

    he's the one bleeding

    white blood so sweet

    I want it inside me

    like a vampire, tasting

    like a vampire, needing

    ***

    then we are spent

    our bodies heaving

    our breaths raspy

    our throats dry

    but both of us

    intensely satifsifed.

    - - - Updated - - -

    Tough Love

    Lift my legs and make me cry

    hurt me, please me, make me die

    within your arms

    within your arms

    I was meant to lie

    ***

    Kiss my lips and betray my heart

    Fuck me, and tear me apart

    with your words

    yes with your words

    I loved you from the start

    ***

    Tie me up and make me try

    shag me, shock me, make me sigh

    with your dick

    yeah with your dick

    you make me feel like I can fly

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    Re: some poetry...

    "S.E.X." is my favorite out of the two. It's very erotic.

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    Re: some poetry...

    Quote Originally Posted by MrMojoRisin View Post
    "S.E.X." is my favorite out of the two. It's very erotic.
    It was supposed to be, sort of my first few attempts at writing specifically erotic poetry. Porn Poetry I call it lol

    I have a couple more poems...I'll share those later

    and thank you for reading!!

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    And I...

    I yearn for his touch

    to lead me into his shadows

    into his darkness

    He is King there

    and I

    shall be his willing slave

    obeying his every command

    and I

    seek the comfort of his hand

    soft and gentle at night

    ===

    I yearn for for his heart

    to lead me into his world

    into his universe

    He is the Star there

    and I

    shall be his astronaut

    setting foot on his surface

    and I

    seek the treasures in his caverns

    glimmering and glistening

    ===

    I yearn for his flesh

    to lead me into the wild

    into his secret hideout

    He is the Lord there

    and I

    shall be his captive

    who dared enter his realm

    and I

    seek the hidden palace of gold

    behind the fragrant bush

    ===

    I yearn for his soul

    to lead me into temptation

    into his embrace

    He is my Savior there

    and I

    the ever searching refugee

    who wanders the unknown

    and I

    shall linger there with him

    until we become one.

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    Re: some poetry...

    Very nice Rick! i would like to share with you one of my poems.


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    Re: some poetry...

    was that a poem or a confession? I'm very bad at reviewing poetry myself... and this style of poetry is not to my personal taste. But thank you for sharing, not just with me, but with everyone else as well.

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    Re: some poetry...

    Ode To My Boy

    Hey there boy
    I'd like to see you
    all dressed up
    ready to go
    Your skin be shielded
    from too stark weather
    by various items
    by various clothes

    Hey there, my boy
    I'd like to touch you
    just for a moment
    to feel that skin
    your hands to hold me
    as if I'm sheltered
    warm and comforting
    by mother's arms

    Hey there boy
    I'd like to kiss you
    your lips on mine
    and mine on yours
    Your eyes to see me
    the way I see you
    not just a moment
    but forevermore

    Hey there, my boy
    I'd like to hear you
    your voice still unheard
    rings through my mind
    Your words to soothe me
    and to entrance me
    feeling like witchcraft
    that thing you do

    Now, hey there boy
    come and play with me
    we'll be like brothers
    we'll play like boys
    If it goes too far, well
    what does it matter?
    I'll be a good sport
    I hope you know

    So, hey there my boy
    may these words reach you
    my heart it tells me
    that you should know
    My soul is yearning
    my heart is aching
    my body wanting
    I love you so.
    I love you so.

    Written when I was chatting with a guy online which I liked - unfortunately he lived in the US but also he didn't see it through. His loss!

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    Re: some poetry...

    I love poetry. I'm enjoying reading yours.

    I like S.E.X., I have just a couple editing suggestions on that one if your looking for some constructive critique.

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    Re: some poetry...

    not really looking for critiqes here - I am on a site for that already but thanks for offering and reading!

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    Re: some poetry...

    Agape [Song of Telemachus]

    My heart beats fast
    my bare skin is wet
    my lips are agape
    my body's bereft
    of such innocence I had.
    Awakened, I
    lay upon this bed
    next to me he lies
    and naked are we
    yet of such love we had made.
    He's lost in dreams
    I wish them I could see
    but I must hope alone
    to feature among them
    they are not mine to command.
    The day is now half-passed
    soon it will be night again
    I yearn for when he wakes
    And yearn more for his truth
    to be taught by his touch.
    His warm, tanned, oily skin
    to mingle here with mine
    his eyes that drink my youth
    his lips that taste my love
    his wisdom enfolds my flesh.
    He says he is my slave
    and that I am his Prince
    and although it is so
    I see it not like this
    but he my Master is instead.
    Oh! to yearn for him so
    to need his hands, so strong
    to want to be so close
    to taste his skin, his lips
    and ache for his fierce sword.
    Such agony it is
    to want something so much
    yet having to wait
    the sun to crawl the sky
    and moon to yet arise.
    So blissful, also, it is
    to have him by my side
    to know he will be there
    to take away this pain
    and to quench this evil thirst.
    For him, I sing my song
    he has made this life complete
    where once I yearned for all
    he's made them obsolete
    for he is all I need.
    At rest again, my heart
    I lay back onto the bed
    my hand upon his chest
    the faint hairs tickle still
    and close my eyes once more.

    Note: The title Agape is the Greek word for Love. The word used in the poem is English with its English meaning for something 'opened wide' .

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