Hi, just a brief foreword before I post the story
Thanks for coming to read. The story is unfinished at the time of posting, but I have ideas where I want it to go, I just wanted to post now to see if there was any interest in reading. So any comments about if you enjoyed it, if you want more, and (constructive) criticism or tips are all appreciated and hoped for.
That being said, I hope you enjoy the story, and thanks again for reading.