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    Reed,
    It's good to hear from you again.
    What a powerful chapter.

    Starts out "nice" enough, aside from one uber jock puking his guts out into the porcelain "god" lol.

    The clean up scene was nice - very nice.

    Christian was having such a good day, then, BAM.

    I am afraid of what Dalton is going to do to the three punks.
    Kill one, or close to it.

    You continue to grab our attention - even if "real life" put your narrative past-time on hold for a bit.

    Thanks for working on your story and sharing it with us.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    kool story....

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    Well, that's one good story! when's the next chapter coming out?

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    When is the new installment coming! I can hardly wait!!!! SOooo GooD!

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    Ahh the suspense!

    I'll be waiting for the update, however long it takes.

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    I know I’ve been bad recently with updating, but here it is finally. I’ve been trying to get back in the swing where I can knock a chapter out every night, but it’s not as easy now. So sorry for the delay and sorry for the future delays. This chapter is also shorter because I didn’t know where to take it and felt it was better off ending than me forcing it. Again, my apologies.
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    Chapter 13



    Everything slowly began to come back as this older man with white hair slapped my face gently. His hands were cold as they made contact with my warm, blood-covered face, repeatedly trying to wake me up. It eventually worked as everything came back to me, and my vision returned back to normal where everything’s crisp and clear. I scanned the room to see if it looked familiar but it didn’t register in my mind. It had white stone walls with a dark blue carpet and a large window overlooking a locker room, most likely the boys locker room. As I looked to my left I saw Marc standing next to me as I was sitting on top of a desk that probably belonged to the older guy who was digging through a cabinet standing tall against the wall.

    Marc looked relieved I was sitting up on my own and was actually responsive and collapsed into a chair beside the desk. He ran his hand through his hair once pushing it back before he brought it back and continued down his face as he exhaled loudly. I mouthed the words “Thank you” to him because my voice still hadn’t come back from my previous encounter. He faked a smile at me as he glanced over his body trying to hide the sight of him cringing. I hadn’t seen myself in a mirror. But as I looked down at my shirt, I saw blood and a good amount of it .

    “We’re going to need to take your shirt off, kid.” The older guy said as he walked back with a first aid kit in his hand.

    “I’ll help him.”

    Marc got out of the seat and was now standing before me. He scanned my body over as I just looked at him trying to smile to let him know it wasn’t that bad. But from the looks on his face, it must have been worse then I thought. He directed me to try and lift my arms up over my head in order to remove my hoodie. As I slowly began to lift them pain began to pulsate throughout my body and worsened the higher they went. By the time I got my arms over my head I had my eyes shut tight and my teeth clenched fighting through the pain. He saw I was having trouble keeping them up and quickly removed my clothes so I could return my arms back to my side.

    “Sorry, Christian. I know that must of hurt.” He said as he folded my sweatshirt and put it on the chair.

    I made a drinking motion at him signaling, I wanted something cold so I could clear my throat and hopefully talk. He simply nodded and ran out of the office into the locker room and out the door to one of the corridors. I came to the conclusion that this older guy had to be the football coach since Marc and Dalton felt comfortable enough brining me to him. The football decorum around the room also helped with this assumption. He was digging through the big container pulling out rolls of gauze, a bottle peroxide, butterfly stitches and a roll of medical tape when Marc returned with a sports drink in his hand.

    “I didn’t know what you liked to drink,” he started as he twisted the cap off and held it up to my mouth for me to drink, “so I got you this since it has electrolytes and all that shit that’s good for your body.”

    “It’s fine.” The words were barely audible as I took more of the drink down. “Thank you.”

    “It’s no problem.” He sat down beside me on the desk. “How are you feeling.”

    “Aside from getting beat and being unconscious twice, pretty good.”

    “Well you look like shit.”

    “Owww,” we both burst out into laughter, “don’t make me laugh, it hurts too much to laugh.”

    “Sorry, I’ll try not to.” He said still smiling. “Do you think he’ll be okay coach?”
    “Well from just looking at him, I would say nothing is broken.” He moved closer to me. “I still want to examine his body to make sure everything’s intact and nothing is punctured or bleeding internally. I‘m going to just have a feel over your torso. ”

    He started at the back of my head running his fingers gently through my hair, making sure there weren’t any openings. Then he made his way down my back scanning over the skin with both his hands and eyes for any sensitive areas, but none were found. When he was done with my back he moved onto my torso which was already a lovely shade of purple and yellow. More pressure was applied to my ribs which caused a wave of pain to surge throughout my body. Marc got hold of my hand as the coach was doing this so I could try and lessen the pain by squeezing it. I took advantage of this generous offer and grabbed his hand tightly over the next few minutes while my bruised skin was poked at with cold firm fingers. Marc just smiled as I crushed his hand and it made me feel at ease.

    “Well,” the coach started “nothing appears to be broken nor does there seem to be any internal trauma.”

    “So he pretty much just got beat up badly?”

    “Well no, a few of his ribs are most likely bruised which are going to cause some discomfort over the next few days as they heal themselves. I recommend lots of icing and then heat as well as some Tylenol to make it more pleasant.”

    “Thanks coach,” Marc started “We didn’t know where to take him and you were the first one to come to mind.”

    “I’m glad you did, Marc, it was a very responsible thing to do.” He picked up the gauze and a tube of muscle relaxant. “I just want to put some of this cream on with a few layers of gauze to help the healing process. Can you put your left hand on Marc’s shoulder and your right one on mine, son?”

    “Yeah…I think I can do that.” The pain once again returned as I stretched my arms up so he could wrap the gauze around my torso more easily. “Is that good?”

    “Perfect.” He smiled as he squeezed the strong smelling white cream into his hand before he brought it to my side. The cream was cold as it made contact with warm skin as the coach slowly and gently rubbed it over the bruised area. The smell was awful as the vapors entered my nostrils and made their way up my nose slightly burning the sensitive area. It then began to get warm as he continued rubbing it into my skin and began to lessen the pain almost instantly. When the white cream was no longer visible, he placed the gauze on one side of my torso and wrapped it around the other, repeating himself until the bruised area was covered. It wasn’t tight until he put this medical wrap over, keeping the gauze in place. He finished up with a final cut to the wrap and proceeded to put the medical items back in the first aide kit. “That should help the healing process speed up a little. I want you to apply more of this cream later tonight and continue doing it twice a day until you feel little to no pain anymore.” He handed me the tube. “You’ve been a good patient, Christian.”

    “Thank you so much. I really appreciate it.”

    “It was no trouble at all.” He said putting his coat on and a winter cap since he was bald. “Keep my star quarterback happy, kid.”

    The words didn’t click as they first came out of his mouth until he was halfway through the locker room. I highly doubt Dalton was the reason why his football coach knew about his love life yet he still knew. I’ve never seen the coach around campus before so he couldn’t have seen me and Dalton together and I’ve never been in here to cause suspicion. I wondered if Dalton knew his football coach found about his relationship with another man and I began to breathe heavy.

    “Are you okay, Christian?”

    “Does…does he know?”

    “Know about what, kid?” I just looked at him. “Oh, you and Dalton. Yeah, he knows about that. It slipped when I brought you here to get help and he asked who you were. He doesn’t care though, Christian; he smiled and said that he’s actually glad Dalton has someone good in his life for once.”

    “He…he really said that?” Marc nodded. “That’s such a weight off my shoulders.”

    “How so?”

    “All this time since Dalton started a relationship with me, I’ve been worried about ruining his football career. I’ve been beating myself thinking that he would get kicked off the team if someone were to find out about him dating another guy.”

    “Do you think we actually care what his sexuality is?”

    I shrugged my shoulders.

    “Seriously, you feel it matters what his sexuality is?”

    “Well, yeah, you guys change in the locker room together and tackle each other in practice. Wouldn’t it be awkward?”

    “Dalton has you, Christian; he wouldn’t try anything with us. He wouldn’t try anything with us if he hadn’t met you regardless.”

    “I guess you’re right”

    “I know I’m right kid. The guy’s a brother to everyone on the team. We would never turn our backs on him, and we won’t turn our backs on you now. You’re going to be accepted by the football team too, kid. If Dalton cares about you, the whole team cares about you so you better get used to being surrounded by football players.”

    “You know you don’t have to do that, right?”

    “We don’t have to do anything, Christian. We could completely ignore you or give you hell but we choose not to. You’re pretty much one of us now, without the whole football part.” He gave me a reassuring smile.

    “That means a lot to me. Really, it does.”

    “You’re our Dalton’s boyfriend; there’s no question that we’re not going to care about you too.”

    I jumped off the table and leaned into him signaling I wanted a hug. He gently wrapped his huge solid arms around me trying not to hurt me, but I didn’t care. I wrapped my arms around his body as tightly as I could and buried my face into his chest. His body was warm as I was pressed up against it and to my surprise, he actually felt like a giant teddy bear. Even though his body was hard as steel, he still felt soft and cuddly as we stood there embraced in a hug. He eventually let go of me, put his hands on my shoulders, looked me in the eye and smiled again. It felt nice to have someone whom you just met a few days ago care about you this much. I couldn’t help but smile back.

    “What do you say we get your hoodie back on and clean up your face…it has dried blood all over it.”

    “I must look so attractive right now.”

    “Trust me babe, you still do.” This voice was much deeper and I instantly knew who it was. Dalton was leaning in the doorway with his arms crossed just looking at the both of us. “If you don’t mind Marc, I’d like to hug my boyfriend.”

    I didn’t care how much pain I was in or how much pain I was going to be in. I started running towards him jumping into the air for him to catch me. He caught me in his strong arms and brought me close to his chest in an embracing and extremely emotional hug. I couldn’t help but cry as he held me there in his arms, overwhelmed with emotions. The thought that I wouldn’t of been able to see him again when I was going in and out of consciousness scared me and began to make me nervous, but all of these feelings were relinquished by this powerful hug.

    The weirdest thing though, had to be the fact that I felt no pain as he had his arms wrapped tightly around my sensitive body. All I felt was the love we had for one another; no pain, no nothing, just affection. I could of just hugged him for hours and didn’t want to let go but he returned me back to the ground. We looked at each other for a few seconds as we stood there until I lunged forward again for another hug. This time I buried my face into Dalton’s chest as my arms locked around his torso. I could hear his heart beat as I had my face pressed against his large pectoral. If this wasn’t love, I don’t know what is.

    “You have blood on your face, Christian.” He said as he looked down at me.

    “So do you…and your shirt.”

    “Well the blood on my face is from the cut under my eye. “ He said touching it gently. “One of the guys got a lucky shot on me and it split the skin open. The blood on my shirt and pants isn’t mine though.”

    “Oh…that makes it all better…”

    “Would you rather it be my blood or someone else’s?”

    “Someone else’s” I said meekly. “What exactly did you do to them, Dalton? They’re not dead, are they?”

    “No, babe, they’re not dead. Pretty close to it, but they’re still alive.” He walked me over to the sink where he started to clean my face. “I think they’ll be leaving you alone from now on.” When my face was cleared of the blood he lowered his head and pressed his lips against mine. The spark was still there. “How are you feeling though? Did coach look you over and everything?”

    “Yes,“ he brought a towel up to his own face to get the blood off. “He put some muscle relaxant on my bruises then wrapped me up. We have to do this twice a day to help with the pain.”

    “I’ll do it for you, don’t worry.” He threw the towel into the cart in the locker room and walked over to a locker and proceeded to open it. “I have a hoodie in here for you to wear since yours got ruined with blood. Let me get out of these clothes too so people don’t look at me like a murderer or something.”

    He threw the hoodie at Marc so he could help me put it on without causing much pain. Dalton then took off his shirt that was once white but now stained with a deep red color scattered all over it. His body was covered with a thin layer of sweat that glistened as the overhead light hit his body. His muscles stayed firm as he took his pants off and bounced around trying to get them over his shoes. His body is simply a work of art with each of his muscles meticulously shaped to perfection. I couldn’t help but stare as he was standing before us in nothing but a small pair of trunks. He caught me staring at him but simply smiled at me and gently grabbed his package thrusting his hips towards me. He motioned that his pride and glory belonged to me and only me and he couldn’t be happier. It made me feel good about myself knowing someone like Dalton wasn’t ashamed to be with a guy like me.

    “Marc,” Dalton started, still in nothing but his underwear. “I heard what you said before and I just want to tell you, I really love you like a brother.”

    “I love you too, man. You know I think of you as a part of my family and I would do anything for you. It doesn’t matter that you like guys; you’re still the same cocky and obnoxious Dalton I met in ninth grade.”

    “Come here.” Dalton opened his arms and started walking over.

    “Can you put some pants on first?”

    “Shut up and just hug me.”

    Marc reluctantly gave in smiling as he wrapped his arms around Dalton and squeezed tightly. Dalton patted his back as they stood there rocking back and forth for a few minutes just embracing one another. It amazed me how two guys could have such a close bond with one another that not even the sexuality of one of them mattered. They acted like nothing had changed between them; something that you don’t see very often in our world today.

    The two finally separated as each held out a closed fist and pressed them together. Dalton proceeded back to his locker and reached inside for a pair of gym shorts as well as an extra shirt he had stored there. He quickly threw them over his exposed body, tied his shoes again and locked his locker. He walked over to me grabbing my face in the process and gently pressed his lips against mine in a passionate kiss. He slipped his tongue in my mouth quickly allowing our tongues to dance with one another as we stood there embraced in our kiss. I could of kept at this for hours but he pulled away all too soon in my opinion.

    “Again, thank you Marc for taking care of Christian for me.”

    “You don’t have to keep thanking me; it’s fine,” he said as we made our way outside. “Just promise me you won’t let him get hurt again or that you won’t hurt him either.”

    “You have my word, man,” he replied as he grabbed my hand as we walked down the pathway. “I’m never going to hurt you Christian. I love you.”

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    Mmmmmmm! So tender, so loving. Glad to read that everyone will be OK.

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    Awwwww such a sweet moment :P. Thanks for updating!

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    Reed,
    It was a powerful chapter.
    It's good to hear from you.

    You don't owe us an apology. Real life trumps play time at JUB.
    We'll keep.



    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Reed!

    That was AWESOME, in so many ways! THANK YOU!! And, Great to hear from You!

    Take Good Care!

    And, Yeah! ... no matter what ...

    Keep smilin'!!
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    Smart move. You've turned out another great chapter that shows the depth and strength of the characters and their feelings for each other. Take your time in thinking your next step through. You're instincts as a writer will find the best path for you and your charcaters. Great job once again! Thanks so much for sticking with this and sharing it.
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    You are a beautiful story teller!

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    Very nice work, reed! The descriptions in your story are very great. It makes reading your story exciting, as though I could almost picture myself there.

    I look forward to reading the next chapters that you have to offer.

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    This was a very good story!

    It gives me hope that I will find someone like that when I decide to come out, hoping I will get similar reactions from family and friends like Dalton had.

    Look forward to more of your readings in the near future.

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    Todays job was reading your story. What a pleasant job it was. The characters present themselves as real people. This seems so much more than just a story.

    I patiently await the next chapter.

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    I've just finished reading every part of this story posted so far. I love the way you have crafted the characters, their development, & the flow of the story.

    Just one criticism (& it's one I'd make about most of the stories I see anywhere)- when you're writing as a character who's supposed to be such a remarkable student as Christian is in the story, you need to write the way they would write (to preserve the little fiction that the text is being written by the character themself). Mistakes like writing "there" when you mean "their", or "forth" instead of "fourth" indicate that the writer is not someone who would be attending Yale on a full academic scholarship. especially with a 4.0 grade average all the way through high school.

    That said, the story is an indication of a good writing talent. Maybe you just need a good proofreader to help get the details right, making your work even better.

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    I have to say that this story is absolutely fantastic! The plot makes me want to beg for more, and the characters send me into my own fantasies. Please continue, and please do so quickly!

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    This has been one of my fave stories for a few months, I hope you come back soon to add more to it.

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    Hey there reed, I have been following this story for THE LONGEST, and I am DYING to read more! Can we PLEASE have an update?

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    This has to be the best story I've read on JUB before, I thoroughly enjoy your writing style and diction. I await your next addition with excitement, and I wish you good luck in any of your life's problems, and hope they get fixed up.

    This story makes me want to go find a boyfriend just like Dalton to hold me every day...

    Thank you for all of your hard work writing for us!
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    I miss this story dearly!!! Reed, I hope you're doing okay, and please update soon .

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    I really enjoyed these last couple of updates! Thanks heaps!

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    I know I'm probably building a lot of false hope by posting in this thread without having an update, but I have some unfortunate news. I don't believe I will be continuing this story even though I said I would try my hardest to do so. The inspiration I once had for this story is no longer present and I have moved onto a new one. I personally believe those who enjoyed this story will like my new one just as much as this one if it is given a chance. It would be greatly appreciated if everyone could read "This So Called Love" to give me positive or negative feedback on it, so I could hopefully write another successful story here. Thanks.

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    Re: Dorming With Dalton

    The story was awesome too bad you cant finish it

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    I'm really sorry, you don't have that magic feeling for the story. I will def read your new one.

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    Here's a link to Reed's new story.

    http://www.justusboys.com/forum/showthread.php?t=338674


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    I'm begging you Reed, I LOVE this story. There aren't any words, it has become a part of me. I know that sounds pathetic, but I hope you find it in you or the magic gets reignited and that you will be able to continue. I shall REED your new story. But I still have yet to find a story that is as lovely as this one.

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    I think I'm going to start updating this story again. I'm not sure if I need a new editor for it, but if anyone is interested, please send me a private message.

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    Omg omgomgomg I'm so excited hahahaha. I can't wait for the next part!! I've missed this story sooo very much.

    Welcome back Reed .

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    I can't wait for a new installment! Your story is great.

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    you totally have to continue this story im so excited this is my FAVE story..... i get re-read the whole thing again to get fresh for the new installment thnx reed

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    YAY!!!! Exciting!

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    It's been awhile, but it's finally here. Enjoy guys.


    Dorming With Dalton: Chapter Fourteen


    I awoke the next day in a large bed in a room that was as first unfamiliar to me. As my surroundings began to be again familiar to me, I knew I was in Dalton’s bedroom, in his apartment, and that I didn’t need to worry. I remembered that he had brought me here last night after everything finished up since it was closer than my own dorm-room. I don’t remember much else about getting here last night because I’m pretty sure that I fell asleep within five minutes.

    I looked to my right and there was Dalton, sleeping peacefully. A white sheet covered one of his legs while the other leg hung off the bed; the sheet just covered his package. I could see the outline of his semi-hard dick resting against his thigh. He was either having a good dream or he had a piss hard; it continued to grow as I watched. I was tempted to take his big meat into my hand and help him out, but I knew he wouldn’t want me doing that. I remembered that during the car ride here that we weren’t going to do anything sexual until I was healed, so my body focuses on healing itself. I tried telling him that I would be fine, but he wouldn’t listen to me.

    I decided that I wanted his hard dick in my hand more than I wanted to follow his command from last night, and I slowly brought my hand toward the growing phallus shape under the sheet. Just the act of reaching those few inches toward him caused both my ribs to throb with pain and my shoulder to twinge, but I pressed forward - very quietly. I was only a few inches away from his completely hard pole tenting the sheet, but he gently grabbed my wrist. My heart skipped a beat while my breathing quickened drastically. Was it the getting caught, or my passion for him?

    “What do you think you’re doing?”

    “I thought you were asleep!”

    “So you think you can just fondle me while I’m sleeping?”

    “It looked like you wanted some attention.”

    He rolled over on his left side and propped his head up with his left hand. His eyelids fluttered open and he looked into my eyes and lightly smiled. He then brought his lips closer to my own and pressed them against mine, giving me a small kiss. Whenever he does this, I am helpless before him.

    “I told you last night, babe, that I don’t want you doing anything like that.”

    “But I want to make you feel good.”

    “I know you do, and I know it would feel awesome, but you need to keep your body as still as possible.” He let go of my wrist and I reluctantly returned it to my side. “Understand?”

    “Yes, I do, but how are you going to deal with those?”

    I pointed to the tent in front of his crotch.

    “Well, I do have my own hands, you know.” He smiled at me and playfully ruffled my hair. How is it that I can become even MORE helpless with this gentle affection and acceptance? “And swelling like this does go away if you leave it alone for a while.”

    “We both have needs though. I have needs. I need you.”

    “I know we do, and if you feel your needs are getting too much to handle, I’ll give in and we can do something that won't stress your body. You better try to save it for a rainy day though. Okay?”

    I sighed heavily before nodding my acquiesce. It was impossible to not look at the precious piece of meat between his legs. I just wanted to feel its smooth skin, its warmth, and his heartbeat in my hand as it pumped it. How his meat would expand under my touch, and grow so very hard was something I could never get enough of. I really crave making him feel good, and if it came down to either having myself feel good or making him feel good, I would make him feel good. Knowing that I blow his mind, literally, is more than enough to keep me happy for the rest of my life. I know that I don’t have to think too much about this since he always had made sure I feel good too, but I still think about it constantly.

    “I’m going to get ready and head down to the school so I can talk to your professors about your work.”

    “Why are you doing that?”

    “Well you don’t think you’re going to your classes banged up like this, do you?”

    “I’m perfectly fine to walk.”

    “Oh, so that’s why I had to carry you last night, huh?”

    “So I can’t walk that well. I can still get around.”

    “You’re staying here until you’re healed enough to walk without pain or my having to worry about you hurting yourself further.”

    “Fine.” I said, watching him get out of bed. “But can I at least have your computer to occupy myself while you're out?”

    He stood up, sideways, and stretched his arms out behind his head. His dick was standing straight out from his groin, pointing up towards his belly. Again, I felt compelled to take his big meat into my hand, but I knew not to bring it up again. I was able to move my thoughts to other things than sex, but I couldn’t keep my own penis from growing erect. I put my hands in my groin so that Dalton wouldn’t see I was getting aroused, but the pressure from my hands didn’t help in the slightest bit. The small amount of friction was all it took to get me completely hard.

    Dalton noticed that I, too, was pitching a tent under the sheet and gave me a mischievous grin. I shot one back at him and removed my hands to show the obvious lump under the sheet. He then grabbed the corner of the sheet covering me, and pulled it off in one swift motion.

    “You’re so beautiful, Christian.”

    He climbed back into the bed and worked his way towards me. He straddled me, his knees on either side of my butt, and brought his face right in front of mine. I lifted my head slightly so I could press my lips against his plump, pink, perfectly formed pair. Dalton quickly took the lead and held my head close to his with his left hand. His lips parted and he pushed his tongue violently into my mouth. His tongue was warm and firm as it probed the dark cavity of my mouth. I met his tongue with my own, and they intertwined together, like a couple dancing the tango.

    I then felt his dick rub up against mine, and I shivered blissfully. The head of his penis was leaking pre-cum which made our dicks slide against each other perfectly. I arched my back and grabbed on to the sheet of the bed, humping Dalton’s hard stomach.

    “I guess you really are okay to do this,” he grinned.

    “My body’s just sore, but the pleasure definitely outweighs the pain. I think it will actually help me heal faster. Improves the flexibility.”

    I brought my hands to the nape of his neck and gently dug my fingertips into the tight spots at the base of his skull. Dalton let out a small moan and I slowly moved my hands down his back. I continued to massage his tense lats and lower back until my hands came in contact with the top of his butt. My hands quickly latched on to the mountains of muscle and I squeezed his glutes. He dropped his head down to my chest and gritted his teeth. He loves it when I massage his glutes.

    I was feeling ambitious and cautiously moved my fingers between his cheeks. He quickly brought his head back up and looked me in the eyes like he was afraid of enjoying what I was doing. I gave him a mischievous smile, and pressed my pointer and index fingers deep between his rock hard cheeks. Dalton gasped at this strange new sensation, his face contorting with pleasure. I knew better than to let my fingers probe his virgin sphincter, so I just teased with his hole for a while. Not once did I stop looking at his face, which was all scrunched up with his eyes and mouth clamped shut.

    “CHRISTIAN!” He seemed to be screaming at the top of his lungs.

    “Dalton?”

    “Stop!”

    “Is it too much for you to handle?”

    “It’s not that!” He tried speaking in a normal tone, but couldn't. His voice cracked. “I want to suck you off.”

    I pulled my fingers from between his cheeks and looked into his eyes as they flew open.

    “You’re ready to do that for me?”

    He got up from his straddle and knelt between my legs, directly in front of my hard dick.

    “I’ve been thinking about it for a while, and it seems like a now's a good time.”

    “Are you sure it’s not because you’re just really horny right now?”

    “It might be, I’m not sure.”

    “Why don’t you go do everything you have to take care of at school, and see if you still want to try it after you come back?”

    “Why wait?”

    “Because, Dalton, if you still want to give me a blow job later, when you’re not horned up, then you really want to take the next step with me. Right now though, your hormones are just telling you to do something. I don't want you to regret it later and resent me.”

    “I guess that makes sense.”

    He got off of the bed and walked through the bathroom door. I heard the sink run for a few minutes, followed by the sound of Dalton spitting into it. We both had to brush our teeth right after getting out of bed in common. Then, I heard the toilet seat hit against the porcelain tank and I knew what came next.

    “It’s fucking impossible to piss with a hard on!”

    I laughed, languishing in the bed while picturing Dalton's problem. Every man has had the experience of trying to piss while erect, so I knew his frustration. He started laughing too, which, blended with the loud and strong sound of his relief, lasting a very long time. I heard him flush the toilet, and then use the sink. I’m glad he washed after using the john; I've been around guys who don't and it's disturbing to me. I’m not a germaphobe, but not cleaning up after doing that always grossed me out and still does.

    Dalton reappeared in the bedroom with a flaccid dick, still a good five or six inches at rest. I always wondered how people with large packages managed to fit everything in underwear. Boxers would seem to be the smart choice here, since they give the most room, but Dalton hardly ever wore them. He was more of a briefs kind of a guy, and today he chose a pair of yellow Calvin Kleins with a black waistband. They weren’t like the white briefs I grew up wearing; they were much sexier and much shorter. I wondered how he was going to fit into them and stared at him adjusting himself into the fabric in what seemed to be a violation of the laws of physics.

    “What are you staring at?”

    “I didn’t know you liked briefs.”

    “Well now you know.”

    He smiled at me, revealing his one tooth that was out of line with the others. I always love seeing that one different tooth. It kind of became his trademark for me, and out of all the other things that could have become his trademark, I wouldn’t have chosen anything else.

    Dalton slid the yellow fabric up his legs until they fitted tightly over his butt. He shoved his hand down the front of the stretchy yellow cloth and adjusted his package so it would show the way he wanted it to. He tucked his limp meat underneath his balls, and there was one large solid lump in the pouch of his briefs. It had to be the size of a fist, probably bigger, just sitting there under that thin layer of fabric. There’s a good chance he’s the most hung guy I have been with. There was this one guy who I had a one night stand with back in high school who might be bigger than Dalton is, but I’d never tell Dalton. He is happy thinking he has the biggest dick I’ve ever come in contact with.

    He then pulled on a pair of skinny jeans, which were faded and had multiple frayed holes in them. This was something else I had just learned about him. I knew he liked tighter fitting jeans, but over the past two months that we have been getting to know each other, he’d never worn a pair of skinny jeans. I was puzzled at how he was going to be able to fit his large thighs, package, and butt into these tight pants, but with deliberation and the clear benefit of much practice, he pulled them right up into place. They fit his lower body like a glove and showed his junk off nicely. He then threw on a black hoodie which wasn’t incredibly baggy, but gave him some room to move around in. Finally, he put on a pair of white Nike Dunks.

    “Don’t you look all hot today.”

    “This is considered hot? I’m not even dressed up.”

    “I know, but I like when you dress like this.”

    “Well, now I can dress this way without people wondering if I’m gay.”

    I looked at him, confused.

    “I changed my relationship status last night. It now says that I'm in a relationship with you.”

    “Why’d you do that?”

    “Because if people knew I was dating you, they wouldn’t even think about giving you any shit for being gay. If I had had it on my Facebook that I was dating you, those guys never would have dared beating you up last night. So, I decided that I’m not going to risk your wellbeing by being in the closet anymore, Christian.”

    “But I didn’t accept any relationship change from you.”

    He smiled at me, with that look a young boy has when his mother catches him with one hand in the cookie jar.

    “What did you do?” I asked sternly.

    “Don’t get mad, but I took your phone when you were asleep and accepted my request for you. I didn’t think you would mind since you’re already out on your Facebook and since most of our friends know already, I didn’t see a problem. Besides, you do love me, at least I think you do.”

    “Are you really sure about this, Dalton? It’s a big step for you and you can never go back.”

    “I know, and I’m ready for it. These past two months or so that we’ve been together have been the best months I’ve had in a long while. I’m happy being with you, Christian. I haven’t been completely happy since my parents died, and I know that they’d be happy that I’m happy. My sister even told me that I looked like the old Dalton she grew up with after she met you at lunch that one day. I couldn’t be happier being with you, and I’m sure that I love you. Call me a fool for saying this since it hasn’t been long, but I love you Christian, so incredibly much, and I never want anyone to hurt you ever again.”

    “I don’t think you’re a fool for saying that. I’ve been feeling the same way about being happy and about how I feel about you. I love you, Dalton. Really, I do.”

    “Good.” He made his way over to the bed and gave me a kiss on the lips. “I'm going to get going now.”

    “Can I shower while you’re gone?”

    “Wait until I get back.” He said, looking for his keys. “You need to put on more antibiotic cream and new bandages after you shower, and I’m not sure you can do it alone.”

    “Does that mean we can shower together when you come back?”

    “Of course.”

    He winked at me, and headed out the door. All I could think about was that shower later in the day.

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    Wow, Reed, it's so good to have you back. Christian is so lucky to have Dalton there to help, protect and love him. How great to have them back as well. Thanks.

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    When Dalton gonna get fucked? Soon?

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    YES!!!!!! I'M SOOOO HAPPY MY FAVE STORY IS BACK!!!!!!

    Umm I dont think I see a situation with Dalton taking any, and I really hope not.

    Thanks for Posting an Update!!!

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    What Craiger said, in Spades!

    Keep smilin'!!
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    Why not? I like to see Dalton become a power bottom cuz I like to see big guy bend over for a smaller guy. it is hotttttttttttttttttt

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    I love this story and I'm thrilled it's back. Keep up the great writing!

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    I'm so freaking glad this awsome story is back in action!

    I agree because why would Dalton take any 1st of all when Christian hasn't? And 2nd why does he have to? Something I've noticed is that ppl always wanna see a couple and think that the big one is gonna be a power bottom and say that'd be hot. That's not the entire point of the story its about love. And they assume that if a couple has roles like top or bottom then its just a mirror of a heterosexual relationship please get over it... btw I really hope I didnt offend anyone, because that was not my intention.

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    Reed,

    I am so glad you have resumed writing "Dorming." As you must realize from all the comments it has received, there is a charm, depth, credibility and sexuality to this story that is absolutely addictive and you haven't lost your touch one bit during your hiatus.

    I do hope we'll get another installment before too long. This is too good a story and too tantalizing an ending to leave us hanging.

    Thanks.
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    This story is so good. Write more!!!

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    Reed,
    Great update!

    I love the guys, and their developing relationship.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    This has to be the best story I have ever read on JUB. I love the way you write, and I love the sexual tension between those two. I'm so glad you're able to continue.

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    Hi, Ben.

    Good to see you.
    Stop by Fun & Games - "Last Post Wins" thread - there are a couple of your compatriots - one from NSW, one from Queensland by the names of AussieGuy91 and Taz.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Reed,

    I was so pleased to see more progress on this story when I went to the "Dorming With Dalton" bookmark. I continue to read it over and over, and since the story has continued, I'm sure to check back every few days.

    While you and others on this site have wonderful stories, this one is my favorite. The detail that you've put into it has allowed me to put myself right at the scene as though I was participating in a movie. It's quite entertaining and I hope you continue. I can tell you're putting a lot of heart into it.

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    I'm loving the story, great job! Looking forward to read the next part.

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    When can we expect a new chapter? I keep checking every day! It's been way too long!!

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    more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee

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    I love this story soo much hope it continues ..

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