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    My new Stepbrothers

    My first story. Comments, suggestions and other feedback would be a great help.

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    Chapter 1: Mama's surprise!

    "Ah! Another boring day," I thought to myself as I sat there in class. Life is the same as always, attend class, cheer on the sports teams, take notes... same old same old. It was the final class for the day... when will it end, I thought to myself. Sitting there, I heard the bell. "Finally, time to go home!" I said as I collected my things.

    "Simon! Are you gonna come with me today?!" I heard a voice say. Oh, Simon's my name by the way. I'm currently in my last year of school, although I'm lucky to be here. My dad died when I was young so I've spent my life raised by my Mama and one day I hope to make her proud. As for that voice you heard, that's my friend, Michael.

    "Go where, Michael?" I asked him, although knowing him it was related to one of the sport teams. Michael’s gay and fairly open with it around some people like me, probably because I still don't know whether I'm straight or gay. Although in most cases, Michael can be fairly 'bitchy' as people like to call him.

    "To watch the soccer team practice, of course! You have to watch them practice!" As you can probably guess...Michael’s target today must be on the soccer team.

    "I don't want too," I replied. "Come on! I'll make this the last time! I promise!" I really didn't feel like it today, I just wanted to go home. "No," I said, grabbing my bag and walking out the door. "Come on! Come watch with me!" Michael said, once again. I turned around, about to tell him no when I heard a voice.

    "Oy! You two, there are people who need to get to practice here!" said Taylor, looking at me with his arms folded. I looked around and realised Michael and I were blocking the hall after leaving the room. "Sor-ree," said Michael in a cutesy sounding voice. I took a step back for him without saying anything, which made Taylor speak up. "You don't need to move, your 'friend' caused you to block the way," he said with an angry look. "Hey! You don't need to be so mean!" said Michael. "The two of us are talking about something of vital importance!" he continued, putting his hands on his hips.

    "I don't care what's important to you, not like it's important to Simon either I bet!" Taylor said. "Suspicious...you brought Simon up...." said Michael smiling.

    "Huh? What are you on about?" Taylor said with a surprised look.

    "Michael! Stop it!" I said.

    "I want an apology!" Michael yelled.

    "No way! You were in my way! I need to get to practice now, I'm late, thanks!" Taylor said finally, as he started running down the hall.

    Michael didn't speak, but his face was full of rage, he was still facing where Taylor was standing. I decided to use this as my chance to escape. I quickly walked down the hall and out the building. As I went past the gate I saw Taylor next to a red scooter.

    His clothes were different from before, I guess he got changed and was leaving his things with the scooter. Taylor and I were in the same grade yet he was taller than me. He had medium-length wild brown hair. His fringe went over his forehead but didn't cover his eyes. He didn't look muscular, yet he didn't look skinny either. He looked up and saw me. He made a gesture that called me over to him.

    "What are you doing Taylor? What about practice?" I said to him as I walked near him.

    "It got cancelled, and to think, I got dressed for nothing! I was about to ride home," he replied looking at me.

    "So that makes this scooter yours then, it's nice," I followed up with as I eyed his scooter. "You like it aye? That makes it worth every dollar, my dad bought one for me and each of my brothers even though I'm the only one that uses it," he said smiling. Everything went quiet, and I heard a piano playing.

    Looking up at the school Taylor said, "Seth...he's playing again." I looked at the school with him... mesmerised by the sound. "Seth's still distant..." Taylor said, still looking toward the school. It surprised me...why did he tell me that...I wondered, and then the piano stopped. "Anyway, time to go!" Taylor said, jumping on his scooter.

    "Hey!" I said, but before I could get another word in, he spoke, "Later," then drove off. I stood there and just thought to myself about what happened.

    I began walking home, but eventually a car pulled up near me and out stepped a man with black hair, black sunglasses and a black suit. "Sir, I'm here to collect you," I heard behind me. Was he speaking to me? I began to wonder till I heard him speak again, "Sir, come here."

    What?! I thought to myself. "Sir, in the car, please," he said, once again.

    "Umm..." I began to say, "I think you have the wrong person...”

    "You are Simon, correct?" he said. "In that case, yes, I have been sent for you, now, in the car please, your mother requests your presence." I wasn't sure what to do, the man looked quite fearsome and overpowering, so I thought it best to follow his orders and sat in the back seat of the car. Inside was another man, "Your mother wants to speak to you," said the man inside the car. "Seymour will take us to her", the man then said and I put on my seat belt. "For now, you can call me Mr.Kabel" said the man who was also in the car.

    The drive to the house wasn't quiet at all, Mr.Kabel asked me about school and life but I didn't know how to answer a man I had just met, Seymour spoke up a few times also. Eventually we arrived outside a large house, "Umm...where's my Mama?" I said slowly getting out of the car. "Your mother is inside, shall we go?" Mr.Kabel said as he walked towards and inside the house.

    'Wow,' was all I could think when I saw the inside of this house. Everything was sparkling clean and looked very fancy. "I'm home!" Mr.Kabel said, then I saw my Mama walk up. "Hello Papa," she said smiling, "Oh I'm sorry he surprised you," she added on. "Sorry, but I just had to meet my new son," Mr.Kabel said.

    "New son! And Mama, why'd you call him Papa?" I yelled out! Mr.Kabel and my Mama looked at me smiling. Another man walked up behind them, he looked as though he was in his early 20's. "Hello Spencer, meet your younger brother," said my Mama.

    "So I noticed," said Spencer, he looked quite serious.

    Spencer was taller than I, had black hair, brown eyes that were behind glasses. He was wearing a suit, complete with tie. "You don't look happy," said my Mama.

    "That's because I'm not," Spencer said.

    "I...I'm sorry!" My Mama replied. Mr.Kabel then spoke up, "Don't think too harshly of him, Spencer is my oldest son, he's also your elder brother."

    "My ELDER brother!" I yelled out.

    "Well yes, your mother and I are currently engaged, " Mr.Kabel told me. I yelled out again, "What?! My Mama hasn't ever mentioned you before!" My Mama then turned to me and spoke, "Even I keep secrets, he-he."

    "Mama! So it's true?" I exclaimed, she followed by nodding then saying, "From now on we will also be living here, isn't that great?"

    "Huh..." was all I could say before I heard yet another voice, "What is everyone doing near the door?"

    "You’re finally awake Spark," said Mr.Kabel. Spark had long blonde hair, he was wearing a tight pink shirt which was covered by a light brown jacket, also he had on white pants.

    "Yes, but, who is he?" Spark said, looking at me.

    "This is your new younger brother, Simon," Mr.Kabel told him.

    "Ah, the one Mother mentioned, I see he's not bad looking, that's one worry gone! It's a pleasure to meet you, I'm Spark, I work at a local clothes shop. Now don't you worry, I'll help you look even better, you’re lucky you got by without me, we'll find you something to match your brown hair, and you don't look muscular or skinny which is good," he told me as he smiled.

    "Spark is my second oldest son," Mr.Kabel said.

    "Ah… um, Hi?" I said, still feeling confused by what was occurring. Behind me, I heard the door open, in walked Taylor yelling, "I'm home! I went past the shops again! Seymour what's for-! Huh?!"

    "Taylor!" I said in shock.

    "What are you doing in my house?" he said, looking surprised.

    "This guy's engaged to my Mama!" I told him.

    "You’re kidding me right...?" he replied to me.

    Then I realised...when he entered he said ‘my house’..."You’re my brother too?!" I yelled out.

    "Eh...wh-what...this guy? My brother? WHAT!"


    "Welcome home Taylor," said Mr.Kabel calmly and with a smile.

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    HAHAHA. Now THAT would be a shock. Please continue.

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    The implications that are running through my head right now....

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    I can't wait for more.

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    Great story so far...make more soon please!

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    Chapter 2: Moving in

    "Oy dad! Don't 'Welcome home' me like that when he's here! He's lying...right?!Right?!" exclaimed Taylor, with a look of both shock and rage.

    "It's true" said Mr.Kabel, once again calmly with a smile.

    "No way!" Taylor responded. Then the door opened again and in walked another man, he was shorter than the others in room, roughly my height ( and I'm shorter than everyone other than my Mama! ) He had long black hair, a black long-sleeved jacket with long black dress-pants.

    He walked in, looked at Mr.Kabel and spoke, "Home...."

    "Welcome home Seth!" Mr.Kabel said.

    Seth stood there, staring at Mr.Kabel. "Seth, Simon is your new brother," he continued as he gestured toward me. Seth turned and stared at me. "Seth is my third son while Taylor is my fourth and youngest son", Mr.Kabel told me.

    "...New brother...." Seth spoke up, but didn't say anything further. After a period of silence, waiting for Seth to speak, Seymour spoke up, "Perhaps we should move into a bigger room." Mr.Kabel agreed, he walked away with Spencer, Seymour, Spark, Seth and my Mama while Taylor and I stood near the door, still in various states of shock.

    "I think it's real..." I said.

    "You’re kiddin' me," Taylor responded. Then we heard Mr.Kabel yell out, "Hurry up you two!". Taylor went first, leading the way. He still had an angry look on his face, keeping both his hands in his pockets. I followed him, till we reached what I'm guessing is a dining room.

    The floors looked new and wooden, while in the center was a long table with various patterns carved into it. On each side of the table were five chairs, making ten in all. Everyone except Taylor, Seymour and I were sitting on a chair. Seymour was standing next to Mr.Kabel, who was sitting next to my Mama. I took a seat across from my mother and Taylor sat next to me. My Mama spoke up first.

    "From now on boys, I'm your Mama, he-he," she said.

    "And I'm your father now Simon," Mr.Kabel added.

    "Appears things are going to get lively around here," Spark said.

    I was about to speak up, but Taylor got in first, "I'm still not happy about this! How can you do this all of sudden?!"

    "Life's full of surprises," Mr.Kabel said. "You can take the vacant room next to Taylor, you’re already acquainted it seems. Also should you need anything, simply ask Seymour," Mr.Kabel added.

    "What?!" said Taylor, then the phone rang, Seymour went to answer it. Taylor continued yelling while Seymour wasn't in the room.

    "Sir, that was a call from the bank, they need to see you immediately," said Seymour, returning to the room.

    "I guess it can't be helped, I'll be back soon," said Mr.Kabel as he stood up. My Mama, Spencer and Spark decided to go with him, despite Taylor's and my protests. Seth just sat on his chair, staring at what was occurring before him. Before they left my Mama spoke up, "Simon, your things are already in your room, Seymour’s quite amazing, he was able to pack up our entire house and move the possessions over here while you were at school." They then left the house, leaving me alone with Taylor and Seth.

    Seth stood and walked away, leaving me with Taylor. I couldn't tell if he was angry or confused. "I'll show you your room then," said Taylor, so I followed him through the house till we reached a hall with doors on each side. "This will be your room," he pointed at the closest door saying. I opened it and walked inside, Boxes were places on the floor next to a double bed. Some were open, I sat down on my new bed and took in my surroundings, considering what had just happened.

    "Who would have thought we'd be family," said Taylor.

    "Yeah..." was all I could say.

    "Well it's not as shocking as these!" Taylor said, pulling out my underwear from the box closest to him.

    "Hey!" I yelled out, trying to take them from him. He was agile, able to move them away from me in an instant. "Ha ha, here", he said smiling.

    "Taylor, can I see your room?" I asked him, hoping he would return the favour. "Ah...alright", he then said, walked out from my room. I followed him to the next door, and watched him enter.

    Looking around his room, I saw a guitar, a soccer ball, and a double bed, just like mine. Spread over the floor were many weights and magazines. "And this is my heaven," he said as he sat down on his bed. "You'd better unpack, I'll go take a shower soon, oh it's the door down the hall, past the bedrooms, the white door," Taylor told me, he then said with a smile, "I'll help if you want me too, unless you don't want me finding anything, ha ha."

    "Nah, it's ok" I said to him as I left the room. I went back to my own room and started to unpack my things.

    I began to place my clothes and other items into various draws. When I finished, I looked up at the time, only an hour had passed. Taylor should have taken a shower by now, so I grabbed my things and walked down the hall searching for the white door, I was thinking to myself.

    Eventually I found the door to the shower room, I opened it and inside I saw Taylor...

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    Ok, I just wanted to offer a few suggestions to make your writing better. I don't want to come off mean so just want you to know this is solely constructive.

    Overall, not too bad with the story line, but there were several grammatical errors. You used their instead of there a lot. Their shows possession. You did use your instead of you're in a couple of places as well. Your again only shows possession while you're is a contraction of you are. Also, the lines that you gave the mom kind of made her seem like a 16 year old teenager. Another thing is that some of the dialogue just seemed rather weak. Not the content, just the phrasing sometimes. The part where Mr. Kabel was introduced, it was almost confusing phrasing for the last part.
    Hope those help, again I don't mean to come off harsh or anything.

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    Quote Originally Posted by know_it_all_212 View Post
    Ok, I just wanted to offer a few suggestions to make your writing better. I don't want to come off mean so just want you to know this is solely constructive.

    Overall, not too bad with the story line, but there were several grammatical errors. You used their instead of there a lot. Their shows possession. You did use your instead of you're in a couple of places as well. Your again only shows possession while you're is a contraction of you are. Also, the lines that you gave the mom kind of made her seem like a 16 year old teenager. Another thing is that some of the dialogue just seemed rather weak. Not the content, just the phrasing sometimes. The part where Mr. Kabel was introduced, it was almost confusing phrasing for the last part.
    Hope those help, again I don't mean to come off harsh or anything.
    Thanks for the help, I'll try and make note of them for future reference. Can't believe I mixed up 'Your' and 'You're', I normally know the difference between them. As for Their/There, I've always had a bit of confusion with them but I'll put some more care into it, thanks.

    As for Mr.Kabel, I'm trying to make him a confusing character, I guess the wording was a bit 'too' confusing, such as how he's taking everything so laid back when in normal cases it wouldn't be.

    For 'Mama' I'm trying to make her act younger when around the brothers since she has only met (or in some cases, seen them) once possibly twice so she wants to get to know them, but when she is with Mr.Kabel or Seymour she acts her age (which I haven't fully decided on, except she would atleast be in her 40's).

    So thanks for that, I'll see what improvements I can make.

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    I've got nothing to do for the next few hours so I decided to put up another chapter.

    Next chapter I'll start getting sexual, unless people want me to continue the bonding a bit more.
    I'm going to attempt at putting each brother in the spotlight for a few chapters so they can open up a bit before it gets sexual as I believe it'll make it better. Once they've each had a turn at being in the spotlight I'll either turn it romantic or just plain sexual based on people's comments.

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    Chapter 3: Bonding

    I opened the door to the shower room where inside I saw Taylor getting changed. He was about to take off his black boxer-brief underwear when he turned and saw me. Despite him not looking very muscular with his clothes on, seeing him like this, I could see that the weights in his room were being put to use. He had barely any spare flesh on him, yet he didn't look at all skinny. His body was hairless, yet his abs drew my gaze. "Oy!" he yelled. I quickly closed the door and ran to my room.

    I wasn't sure what to feel, should I be ashamed for walking in on him? Should I be angry at myself for looking at him...why did I look at him? I began to wonder. All these questions circled in my mind till my door swung open and in walked Taylor. His hair was wet; I guess he finished his shower, exactly how long had I been thinking?

    "Knock next time, I won't get angry just this once," he said.

    "Oh...Sorry Taylor," I replied to him.

    "You put your stuff away right?" he asked me. I nodded as I looked at him, his hair still dripping wet. "You haven't explored the house right? Come with me," he said smiling as he walked from the room. I followed him, "I've already told you, but all our rooms are along here," he said, then raising his hand he pointed to each room saying a name, "That’s yours-mine-Seth’s-Spark’s-Spencer’s,” he said. He followed up with, “Seymour stays in the guest room which isn't connected to the house," then turning to me said,. "Follow me." He took me around the house and showed me every room while telling me about his brothers.

    "Spencer works in the city, his work bores me so I won't go into detail. Just don't damage his suits. Spark owns his own shop nearby, he can be an annoyance and even a perve but you'll get used to it. Seth's an odd one. He spends all of his time playing piano either here or at our school. He doesn't speak much, as you would have noticed. Seymour is pretty much our live-in butler; he's been here since Dad inherited money from his grandparents." We continued around the house, discussing his brothers, the current circumstances, even school. Eventually we heard the door open, so we walked back.

    "Well that's sorted," said Mr.Kabel with a smile as he walked up to us. "You both look close," he said.

    "It's getting there," Taylor replied. Seymour, Spark and Spencer walked past us, Seymour headed towards the dining room while Spark and Spencer headed for the bedrooms. My Mama spoke up once they were gone, "You boys should get ready for dinner, Papa speaks highly of Seymour's cooking." Hearing this,Taylor and I decided to return to our own rooms.

    Dinner was relatively uneventful, we got called after a while and everyone took the same spots as earlier. The only thing I found interesting was the sight of Seymour in an apron. After dinner I went to my room to rest, unaware of the shock I'd get the in morning following my first night in my new home.

    I awoke the next morning and felt the warmth of my bed, I wondered to myself what day it was till I realised it was Saturday. My surroundings were different from normal, then I began to recall what had happened yesterday. However before I fully grasped the situation I realised that something was behind me. I wasn't sure what to think till I felt it move, then without warning I just yelled out in fear.

    I rolled over to get a look at what it was, and I saw Spark sleeping next to me in bed. Then my door swung open and in charged Taylor yelling, "What's wrong?" then he seemed to notice Spark, who began to wake up slowly.

    "Spark! What the fuck do you think you’re doing?" Taylor yelled. Spark looked like he was half asleep; he just sat there for a minute then spoke. "I was hoping to get to know the new guy a bit more but he was fast asleep. He looked so cute I couldn't just leave him," he said grinning.

    "Just get out!" Taylor yelled. Spark got up and left the room leaving me alone with Taylor.

    Taylor turned to me and came closer, he started to pat my head then spoke, "You'll be alright." He then smiled while looking down at me, compared with his other brothers he was...nice. Taylor told me that my Mama and Mr.Kabel had gone shopping with Seymour while Spencer had gone to work. Spark would be leaving for work soon too, so he would be going out to find something to do. Eventually he turned and left the room, I decided I wouldn't stay around the house either.

    I got changed and started thinking of what to do when I saw Taylor walk past me and leave. He was wearing a soccer jacket and soccer pants, I guessed he was going to practice. I walked out of my new house and roamed the neighbourhood, looking at the nearby shops. According to my watch two hours had passed since I left so I decided to start heading home. On my way back I passed a park where Taylor was playing soccer with little kids.

    I sat there and watched him, but things felt so...different. His smile, his laughter, as he played around with the kids, he also looked like a kid. "Simon!" I heard my name called out, Taylor ran over to me. "How long have you been there?" he asked, once again smiling,

    "Not very long," I replied smiling back. "I didn't know you had a little boy inside you." I followed up with.

    "Hey I'm not a little boy," he said with a laugh. "I'm going back home, you wanna come with me?" he asked. I stood up and without warning he grabbed me and started rubbing my head hard.

    "Hey!" I said.

    "Who's the little boy now?" he said back to me, he let me go then ran in the direction of the house. I chased him till we got home.

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    Thanks. Good story.
    You are being quite mysterious about the brothers, are they gay??
    Please tell us more
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    Quote Originally Posted by harry113 View Post
    Thanks. Good story.
    You are being quite mysterious about the brothers, are they gay??
    Please tell us more
    Harry
    I'm kind of getting the vibe that Spark is

    Very good story, hope to see more!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Swifty View Post
    Thanks for the help, I'll try and make note of them for future reference. Can't believe I mixed up 'Your' and 'You're', I normally know the difference between them. As for Their/There, I've always had a bit of confusion with them but I'll put some more care into it, thanks.

    As for Mr.Kabel, I'm trying to make him a confusing character, I guess the wording was a bit 'too' confusing, such as how he's taking everything so laid back when in normal cases it wouldn't be.

    For 'Mama' I'm trying to make her act younger when around the brothers since she has only met (or in some cases, seen them) once possibly twice so she wants to get to know them, but when she is with Mr.Kabel or Seymour she acts her age (which I haven't fully decided on, except she would atleast be in her 40's).

    So thanks for that, I'll see what improvements I can make.
    Your chapters have been given a little TLC and the minor problems solved.

    Some folk may find the situation you describe unusual but it is far from uncommon for two families to be brought together in this way. The development of your story promises to be very interesting!



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    Chapter 4: Crossing the line

    We arrived in front of the house, I began to breathe heavily yet Taylor still looked like he could run for miles. "Was I too much for you?" he said laughing as he opened the door. I couldn't reply as I was more concerned with breathing. "Hey...are you alright?" Taylor said, as I walked past him. "I'll be fine", I replied. "I just need to catch my breath", I added in. "Hmm..." Taylor began with, "Go take a shower and cool off, I'll check whose home" he said. I nodded then walked towards my room. I grabbed my things and then went to take a shower. I stood there, giving my body a chance to rest.

    When I was done I went back to my room to lie down, still feeling tired. I sat on my bed considering taking a nap when I heard steps outside my door. I heard two knocks and then in walked Taylor, he had different clothes to earlier, now wearing black pants and a red shirt. "Your mother, my dad and Seymour are in the kitchen currently" he said as he closed the door. "You feeling better?" he asked. "A bit, just tired right now" I replied to him. "Do you want me to let you rest?" he asked me. "You can stay" I told him. "Ok then" he replied, sitting next to me on my bed.

    He lied back and spoke again, "You don't do physical activity much, do you?”. “Not really" I replied yawning. He put his hand up and started to rub my head while I was yawning. I leaned over and rested by head on his chest, through his shirt i could feel his body. Then without warning, I drifted off to sleep.

    I awoke after what I guessed was several hours. Looking up at Taylor's face, he also appeared to have fallen asleep. Though he began waking up when I lifted my head, he looked at me then smiled. I moved around to make myself more comfortable but when trying to find a spot for my hand, I felt something hard. I turned to look and I realised where I had my hand.

    "Haha, sorry bout that" Taylor said laughing. I started laughing and began poking his crotch; he didn't seem to mind and was even laughing about it. "You see what you did to me," he said, with continued laughter. "You’re lucky you have a cute face and I let you turn me into a pillow", he said.

    'He called my face cute' I thought to myself.... "Your face is better" I replied to him without thinking. "Oh yeah?" he said, grabbing me and pulling me closer. He pulled me into a position where I was lying near him, but it seemed like he realised how close I was now to him.

    It happened in an instant, but our faces got closer to each other till our lips touched and we began to kiss. I felt a surge of emotion flood through me; I lost control of my hand which moved to his still hard dick. I began to rub him through his clothes, but he pulled away from my face and spoke. "Look...this shouldn't even be happening" he said. It felt like something inside me split, I began to feel sad but I didn't know why! I began to move my hand from his crotch, realising in my mind he was right, despite the sadness I was feeling in my chest. He looked up at my face and then spoke "Alright...”. He leaned in and kissed me, after it he spoke once more "Your lucky you have a cute face" he repeated. I moved my hand down to his crotch, rubbing him once again.

    "Here" he said, reaching down to his crotch he pulled his pants and boxers down. "Guess I'm lucky I locked your door when I came in earlier" he told me, I looked over at my door and confirmed it. I grabbed his dick and began moving my hand in rhythm. He could easily have been 7, or even 8 inches long, he still had his foreskin too.

    "You know how weird this is?" he said looking down at me. "Weird?" I asked him. "Dude...you’re going to be my brother", he replied as his breathing increased. "Going to", I pointed out to him; "I'm not your brother yet". In between breathing he let out a laugh, "Your also a dude..." he said. "First time?" I asked him, without letting him know it was my first some doing anything sexual, or even kissing another person. "With a dude..., gotten many blowjobs off girls" he told me. I began to lose myself to instinct as I watched him breath. I moved my face closer to him and then took him in my mouth.

    "Ah! Sh-!" was all I heard him say before I felt him throb in my mouth. Warmth erupted in my mouth and his breathing began to dye down. I pulled my mouth off his dick and swallowed, I wasn't sure what else I could do with it. Taylor pulled his pants up and spoke, "Look...don't say anything ok?”. "Alright" I replied, upon hearing this he gave me a smile. He turned to me and put his fist up playfully, so I hit his with my fist. "Good one" he said as he stood up. "I'm gonna go have a shower...just remember...don't say anything...ok?" he said again. He unlocked my door and walked out of the room.

    My first kiss, my first time doing that… and yet these feelings...I looked up at the roof and thought to myself, 'I think I like him'.

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    Last chapter for Taylor's story arc.
    Starting next chapter, another brother becomes the focus.
    And yes, Taylor will still be around.

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    Chapter 5: Secret feelings

    I sat there, reflecting on what had just happened. I thought of the discovery I had and these taboo feelings I now held. I turned over and began to lie down, contemplating everything. Time passed and I decided to go take a shower.

    When I was done, I returned to my room. Before I had a chance to do anything, I heard a knock. Outside my room stood Seth, I've yet to ever really speak with him. "...Dinner..." said Seth, in a low monotone voice. After he spoke he turned to leave, I walked with him through the hallways but Seth did not speak.

    When I got to the large table people were in their seats. Spark and Spencer were home also. Taylor was in his seat and a spot next to him was the only remaining seat. I sat down and looked at him, but he didn't look back.

    I ate quickly and then left the table. It worried me about being near Taylor, he asked me not to say anything...so I don't want anything getting out. I went back to my room and slept, this time using the lock on my door.

    I woke up the next day and looked at the time, 11:57am Sunday. I must have slept through breakfast. I changed my clothes and walked through the house. I started to hear a piano play. 'Seth...?' I thought to myself as I followed the source of the music.

    I followed the music till I reached a door, would it be improper for me to enter? My hand reached out, turning the handle and opening the door. Inside I saw Seth playing a Piano. He didn't seem to notice the door open, so I took 3 steps forward. I still got no reaction so I spoke up, "Seth". Upon hearing this, he stopped playing and turned to me in surprise. "...what...?" he said.

    "You’re good at that" I told him. "...How much did you hear..." he asked. ”Everything" I told him. Seth stood there staring at me. "Aren't you going to continue?" I asked him. He shook his head, then walked out of the room. I left the room and walked towards the kitchen. When I passed the front door it opened and in walked Taylor.

    "Yo" he said. I turned and looked at him, he was standing there smiling. "Your finally awake" he followed up with. His smile was causing me to turn red, "I was tired yesterday..." I said to him. "Oh...yeah..." he said. ”Hey, could I speak to you in secret for a sec?" Taylor asked. I nodded and we walked to his room.

    I walked in and he walked in after me, closing the door. "Look...it's about yesterday" he said. "I'm not gay, but it just happened" he then said. "And I kinda...I dunno..." he added in. He walked up to me, smiled and patted my head. His smile, his touch, these feelings...I couldn't hold back. I leaned in and kissed him.

    His smile turned into a kiss and he kissed me back. "We can't..." he said. His face then turned serious and he spoke "Alright look, I'll just say it since I'm a man". "I feel different about you, look I don't know what it is but just go with it" he then said. He leaned in and hugged me, then whispered into my ear "I'm not gay, but you’re...I don't know what to call it...cept I'm here for you".

    We just stood there hugging; I could feel his heart beat through my body. "I thought about it a lot, I don't know what it is...I'm gonna look out for you, alright?" he said. I nodded my head, still in his embrace.

    "Hey...you like me, don't you?" he said, as our hug started to separate. I looked at his face and replied to him with a smile "Yeah".

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    Thanks Swifty, Great !!
    So Taylor isn't gay, but ......
    Who is next, I wonder?
    Please tell us more
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    Quote Originally Posted by harry113 View Post
    Thanks Swifty, Great !!
    So Taylor isn't gay, but ......
    Who is next, I wonder?
    Please tell us more
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    I wonder I wonder

    Could it be the quite Seth?
    The perve Spark?
    Or the one shrouded in mystery Spencer?

    You'll know in a few days

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    Great story so far.

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    Woo nice story. It's getting interesting but I sorta want to know more about mom and dad and how the heck they got together out of nowhere.

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    Quote Originally Posted by King08 View Post
    Woo nice story. It's getting interesting but I sorta want to know more about mom and dad and how the heck they got together out of nowhere.
    I plan on covering that in one of the other brothers stories

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    I plan on covering that in one of the other brothers stories

    Works for me. It just seemed like bam parents are together ok moving on to the kids lives. Even so this is a very good story so far.

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    Sorry bout the lack of updates guys. My dogs been having seizures these past few days so I've been pretty preoccupied with that and Christmas.

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    It's ok, we still love you. We'll just have to wait for the next amazing chapter.

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    Aww, I hope the hound's OK.

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    I'm loving this story . Can't wait for the next chapter.

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    Slight change in plans, I'll start the next brother's story in chapter 8 so think of this as a mix of filler material and Taylor stuff . I just really wanted to get Michael involved

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    I rewrote it from scratch so many times but I'm happy with the result

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    Taylor soon left my room, and the rest of the day was rather quite. A thought crossed my mind as I prepared for bed, 'I wonder what Michael will say'. Would he be as surprised as I was? Would he take advantage of the situation? Something I'll find out tomorrow I thought, as I drifted off to sleep.

    I awoke the next morning to a knock at my room door. I unlocked my door and there stood Taylor in his uniform, "You're coming to school with me so meet me at the front door in half an hour" he said. I closed my door and got dressed, putting on my black school trousers and my white shirt along with the red school tie. I went to the kitchen and picked up something to eat then went to the front door.

    Taylor and Spark were there talking, "Yo" said Taylor when he saw me. "Simon, your tie" said Spark as he walked up to me. "Who taught you how to do this?" Spark added as he took off my tie. "I still can't believe that school has you wearing these god-awful ties" said Spark as he began redoing my tie. Taylor watched on but didn't look happy.

    "We need to go" said Taylor grabbing my hand and dragging me out the front door. Spark watched us both with a smile, "Play nice!" he yelled out. Taylor took me to his scooter and told me we'd be riding it to school. Next to his scooter were 2 red helmets, he handed me one and showed me how to put it on. When we both had our helmets on, he sat on the scooter and turned it on. He instructed me to sit behind him and hold onto him. I placed my hands around his chest, and we began our ride to school.

    "Hey if I have training after school either wait for me or call the house and have Seymour pick you up, don't go back alone ok?" Taylor said to me during the ride. "Alright" I replied. "Also, if you need me during a lunch break I'll be in the school gym. The coach gave the team access so we could practice in our spare time but I'm the only one who uses it." Taylor told me. The rest of the ride we just spoke casually, it surprised me. He wasn't acting any different, even after yesterday's talk. When we arrived at school we went our separate ways. No sooner had Taylor walked away that Michael came running up to me.

    "Why were you with Taylor?!" said Michael, no 'Hello' or 'Hi' he went straight to questions. "Come with me a sec", I said to him as we walked to a quite spot in the school. I explained the events of the past few days to him, except a few details on Taylor. Although I did tell him Taylor was one of my new stepbrothers.

    Michael just looked at me in both shock and surprise when I was through telling him. "O-my-God!" was the first thing he said. "Ok! You can't say no, I'm checking out your new home tomorrow afternoon...wait make that this afternoon!" he then said. "Taylor better be nice! Or else it'll on like 2 bitches in heat!" Michael said laughing. The bell rang, starting our day of classes.

    Eventually our lunch break came up and I decided to go see if Taylor was at the gym. The gym appeared to be closed, but I knocked just in case. Almost immediately the door opened and their stood Taylor. "I had a feeling you'd come the first day" he said as he gestured for me to enter.

    I told him about Michael as we walked and he didn't seem happy. "Just keep him under control...if you can" he told me. "I'll try and endure it..." he added in. He took me to the seats in the locker room were we continued to talk after we sat down. "Hey umm...I thought you'd be acting different after yesterday" I said to him.

    "Cause I know you like me? Normally it would have, but you're my pretty much my brother now so I had to move past it. We've got to take care of our team, in this case the team being the family. Which you're now a part of." Taylor said as he smiled at me. "Brother...you called me your brother, not a stepbrother but a brother" I said to him, that word 'brother' really stood out to me. Taylor poked my forehead, "I sure did" he said. I looked at him and smiled.

    The bell rang to signal the end of our lunch period. Taylor and I stood up, preparing to leave. He walked me to the exit of the gym but before we separated he spoke, "Thanks for coming".

    The rest of the day went by quickly and the afternoon came. Taylor didn't have practice so we went home together. Michael was going to come over at 4pm, giving us an hour after school ended to prepare. When we got home, I told my Mama while Taylor told his brothers. The doorbell rang at 4 and I went to answer it. Spark and Taylor walked to the door and stood behind me as I opened the door.

    "This is how you dress at home?" Michael said without even saying 'Hello'. Spark just broke down laughing and said "I like this guy already!"

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    hahahaha!
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    Spark is particularly cool.

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    This story just keeps getting more and more interesting!

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    hahahaha!
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    Spark is particularly cool.

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    That's quite a compliment thanks!

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    Chapter 7: Michael V The Stepbrothers - Part 2

    Michael laughed to himself a little, then jumped in and hugged me, "Simon!" he yelled out as he hugged me. Taylor jumped back and looked annoyed, but Spark walked up to me. He pulled Michael off me then pulled me into an embrace. "You can have him when I'm done" said spark in a soft tone. "Excuse me?!" Michael said, pulling me away from Spark and hugging me once again. "Simon's mine!" he then said. Spark then grabbed me again and attempted to pull me back. Spark was to my right and Michael was to my left, both pulling me in their direction. Taylor looked on in annoyance till Seth walked past us and stopped to see what was happening.

    He stood there staring, but Michael spoke up first. "Who called the wrist-cutter?" said Michael. Spark let go of me and broke down laughing on the floor. In between breaths and laughs he said, "Seth! That's like the best thing someone's called you!” I looked at Seth, who was still showing no emotion. He turned and walked away towards to the kitchen. "Well that was fun, so who's going to show me around!" Michael said.

    Thus Taylor, Spark and I showed Michael around. We found my Mama and Mr.Kabel while we showed him around. He gave my Mama a big embrace and they spoke about life. Eventually we got to our bedrooms so I let Michael inside my bedroom. "Boys! Private chat with Simon right now. Thanks. Love ya!" Michael turned around and said once we entered my room. "I don't know about this..." Taylor said. Spark turned around and grabbed Taylor, pulling him out of the room. When the door was closed, Michael turned to me and spoke. "This is like....wow Simon!" he started with. "Great house, hot boys, all you’re missing is a butler!" Michael added in as I heard a knock at my door.

    Behind my door stood Seymour with a plate of food for us to share. After I took it from him, I turned to Michael and saw how shocked his face looked. We spoke for what seemed like an hour; eventually we decided to go find the brothers. We found them in the Kitchen talking, Spencer was home. "Hey boys!" Michael said when he saw them. Spark was the only one to say "Hey" back to him. I went and sat near Taylor, this seat was always open and seemed 'reserved' for me. Michael sat near them, and attempted to make conversation with them.

    I wasn't really paying attention till I heard Michael say my name. I looked up and saw everyone looking at me. "Wh-what?" I asked. "I just asked if you liked living here", said Michael. I began to say "Well I d-" but I was cut off when Michael said "I wanna swap! You couldn't possibly like it here!" Michael added in. "Look who your living with!" Michael said while pointing towards Taylor and Seth.

    "What's that meant to mean?!" Taylor yelled. "Look, you may be his friend, but you can't choose his life for him!" he followed up with. "I refuse to let my Simon stay here!" Michael said standing up and yelling. "And yet..." Seth began saying. "Your friend should be allowed to choose his own life, and thus not be forced into actions or situations he would rather not perform." Seth continued with. I looked at his face and he looked...different. Much more focused than normal.

    "...I'm NOT leaving Simon here!" Michael once again said. "Leave. If you aren't happy with us then don't return. But Simon stays here." Seth said. Spark stood up and dragged Michael out of the house; he must be taking him home. Seth stood up and walked away, as did Spencer who was watching the whole time. "I'd best let them know what happened here" Spencer said before he left the room. By 'them' I guessed my Mama and Mr.Kabel. I returned to my room also. At about 9pm I heard a knock at my door and in walked Taylor.

    "Hey, are you ok after today?" he asked. "Yeah...Michael really doesn't like you all" I replied. We both laughed and then Taylor brought up Michaels question from earlier, "You never gave a full answer to his question". "Oh...right" I said, as I sat on my bed. "Well...do you like living here?" Taylor asked sitting beside me.

    I took a deep breath and spoke from the heart. "Well I didn't at first, but...you did make it better". "Today I felt...apart of this house, this family. I felt...loved." I said, looking up at Taylor. Taylor leaned in and kissed me like he did that day, then spoke "You are loved, more than you think". Then he got up and left my room. My face was flushed so I decided to go for a walk to cool off.

    When I was near the kitchen, I saw Seth. He was staring out the window at the darkness outside. "Hey..." he said, turning to me. ”Do you know what it is to be alone?”

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    I love the story,principally the last chapter; i also love to see Seth developing in this last chapter.

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    I like the way the story is developing and I also appreciate that you did not jump too far ahead like you originally planned.

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    OMG dude, please keep this story going! I am loving where this is headed. Awesome job buddy.

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    Chapter 8: Do you know what it is to be alone?

    His words confused me, why would he ask such a thing? Thoughts rushed through my mind till my concentration broke when Seth walked up near me. He placed his right hand under my chin and lifted my head till we were about an inch from touching lips. "Do you feel darkness?" he said. I looked at him; I didn't know what to say...what was he trying to tell me? He removed his hand from my chin and walked down the hall, disappearing from my sight.

    I went back to bed, still surprised as to what had happened. I awoke, dressed and went to school with Taylor. Michael was still angry about yesterday. During lunch break I went to see Taylor.

    "Taylor, did something happen to Seth? Why is he so...distant?" I asked him. "I don't know" he replied. "Why do you ask?" he said. "I spoke to him last night...and he was asking questions that were odd" I said. I told Taylor what happened last night.

    "Do you know what it is to be alone? Darkness?" Taylor said with a puzzled expression. "Seth spends most of his time alone. He dislikes social occasions and spends most of his time reading or playing piano. I guess you could say he surrounds himself in 'darkness' if you refer to darkness as being alone." said Taylor.

    "And he pulled you close aye" Taylor said as he performed the same action as Seth had the night before. "Taylor..." I said when our lips almost touched. "Your face is still cute" Taylor said with his now infamous smile. I felt embarrassed but I still managed to pull off a smile of my own. He eventually let go of me, but he still kept me close. The bell rang to signal the end of our break period, but before leaving he told me "Look out for Seth".

    The rest of the day was just like always, I returned home with Taylor and got changed in my room. I thought I had best speak with Seth, so I went to his room. I knocked on the door but there was no reply. I opened the door and looked inside. Inside I saw books all over the floor, following the trail I saw Seth sitting on his bed reading.

    "Seth...are you ok?" I said walking in. He gave me no reply, not even looking at me. I had to get his attention, so I asked him the question he asked me "Do you know what it is to be alone?”. He looked up at me, then placed his book down and spoke.

    "To be alone is to be surrounded in darkness. A feeling with no light and no escape. A place where no one cares for-" Seth's words were hurting me. Not because of what he was saying, but because of the experience he put behind it. A sharp pain was piercing my heart and without control I moved forward and kissed him. Stopping any further words from increasing the pain.

    He tried to fight me off him, but his resistance soon ceased. Eventually I pulled off him. He looked at me with both a look of shock and confusion, one of the few times I’ve seen him show emotion. I stood up and left his room, my heart still hurt. I walked back to my room with one hand over my heart and my head looking at the floor. When I was near, I bumped into someone.

    I looked up and their stood Taylor. "Are you alright?" he said. Thoughts began to run through my head after what Taylor told me earlier. Was this the pain Seth felt? Had Seth been alone to the point where it hurt? But he could not escape it due to being surrounded in darkness? Thinking of Seth made the pain increase, and tears began to fall down my face.

    "Simon?...Dude?...Bro?...." I heard Taylor say. Then I felt an embrace, as I was pulled into a room. I was placed on a bed and embraced once again. "What happened?" I heard Taylor say. I looked up at him, still with tears dripping and spoke.

    "It hurts..." I said. "What does?" Taylor asked. "Seth feels alone...and it just hurts to think of what he must feel" I said looking at his face. He looked at me, with both care and worry in his face. I felt his embrace, then his mouth covering mine. Then I felt him enter my mouth, his tongue moving around my mouth. The pain I felt began to disappear.

    The pain subsided, and he pulled away. "You aren't alone and he isn't either. He just has to realise it, like you just did.

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    Swifty, the English teacher in me gives this story an A+.

    You have caputred your audience's attention, and have begun to to develop your characters deeply.

    I can't wait to see what happens next...


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    Yes, oh God yes! This is the good shit. Lol. Keep it going dude and Happy New Year!

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    Best Chapter Ever; You just earned a loyal fan.

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    Another loyal fan friend

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    Re: My new Stepbrothers

    Very good story. I'm enjoying it.

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    Another loyal fan is totaly enjoying this story.
    Thank you for another great chapter.
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    Chapter 9: Realisation

    I lay there in Taylor's embrace, feeling his warmth. I wasn't alone I knew this now. Where there was once pain, I now felt love. I felt as though I belonged here, in this embrace. I tried to sit up, but Taylor held me down. "You’re not going anywhere" he said to me. "You’re spending the night here, not gonna have you think of Seth and start crying again." he told me. "But what if the others find out?" I said to Taylor. "We'll make sure they won’t, I told you I'd look out for you and I meant it" said Taylor. Eventually he freed me from his embrace but not till I promised him I'd return after dinner.

    I went to my room and worked on my homework. After it was completed I was called to dinner. Seth didn't show up, causing Mama and Mr.Kabel to worry. Seymour attempted to coerce him to come, but he refused. After dinner I returned to my room and changed into some clothes to sleep in, and then I began to sneak into Taylor's room.

    As soon as I entered Taylor jumped me from behind and cuddled me. "You ok? Seth didn't show up to dinner..." Taylor said. I nodded but I was concerned...was it because of me? "It'll be ok" Taylor said as he rubbed my head. Eventually Taylor and I were lying on his bed and we began discussing Seth.

    Seth was alone, but I wanted him to not be alone. Even if it's just 1 person, it's better than being by himself. I wanted to find a way to prove to Seth he wasn't alone with me and his brothers. "We'll find something" Taylor said as we both drifted off to sleep. I was determined to help Seth with Taylor's aid.

    I awoke what appeared to be a few hours later. The sun had yet to rise and Taylor was next to me. I sat up, and Taylor began to awaken. "Something wrong?" he asked me. "I just woke up..." I said to him. He pulled me close to him and into another embrace. "You’re warm..." I said to Taylor, as I felt his body heat. He began to laugh to himself. He put his hand near my face and pulled me into a kiss.

    "Look..." he began saying. “I thought about it a bit and...go for it..." he then said. "Go for it?" I asked him. "You'll understand when you’re with Seth" he said smiling. We both drifted off to sleep in each other’s embrace. Taylor wanted me to do something to help Seth, but I didn't know what.

    When I awoke once more, the sun was up. Taylor was still asleep next to me; our embrace had broken while we slept. I nudged Taylor and he woke up. "Mornin'" he said to me. I smiled back to him. I got off the bed, and so did Taylor. "Err...you’re..." I said, looking at his crotch. "You don't get morning wood?" Taylor said laughing as he looked at me. I laughed back as I shook my head. He started getting changed for school in front of me. "Umm...?" I wasn't sure what I should say or do.

    "Huh?" Taylor said turning to me. "You've seen it before...so why hide it?" he said as he continued getting changed. When he was dressed he told me to get dressed for school. I slowly returned to my room and got changed. We had breakfast then went to school. Seth was absent from the meal once again, though Mama told me he requested to eat in his room.

    School seemed to drag on and on. I planned to do whatever I could to help Seth, writing down ideas in my notebooks and playing different scenarios in my head. The lunch bell rang and I went to discuss ideas with Taylor. I told him my thoughts and he provided his. Eventually when I was through with my Idea's I sat there, resting my head on Taylor's shoulder. "You know...I really do like you" I said to him. He looked at me and smiled, and then he leaned in and kissed me. After it he pulled back and whispered into my ear "Thanks". He then pulled away and sat back, "Your fun to kiss...let’s leave it at that" Taylor said. Before I could probe him for more details the bell rang to signal the end of our time.

    I continued thinking of ideas till school ended, and then Taylor and I returned home. When everything seemed quite, I went to Seth's room. I knocked and got no answer so I entered his unlocked room. Inside I saw Seth...

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    Write more soon please, i check this forum daily, simply to see if you've posted another segment.
    write it down, i'm a devoted fan!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chariotrider View Post
    Write more soon please, i check this forum daily, simply to see if you've posted another segment.
    write it down, i'm a devoted fan!
    WOW!
    I'm so happy!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Swifty View Post
    I continued thinking of ideas till school ended, and then Taylor and I returned home. When everything seemed quite, I went to Seth's room. I knocked and got no answer so I entered his unlocked room. Inside I saw Seth...
    Huh? OMG! What was Seth doing? Organizing his Honchos using the Dewey Decimal System?

    Terrific so far, looking forward to much more.
    Thanks Swifty, a kiss4U

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