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    Re: Dave Mate !

    I know you are making many of us happy by the continuance of this story. I look forward to the next 20 chapters.

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Oh dear, you have me on pins and needles now. I hope Ra has some surprise for Dave. And as far as writing since high school, it only means that you have a little more of a mature idea of life...... I can deal with that. Looking forward.

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Really great so far, very sweet story line.

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    JAG,

    I like that, romance and drama. What could be better. And thank god they are not going to die. I don't think I could handle that......lol On with the show!

    Craiger

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    lol at the bareback mountain comment. been following this since the 1st old post and I can't wait for the next one (so is ra gonna give him a bigger tiki? hahaha )

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Quote Originally Posted by justaguy View Post
    Thanks Zorro and Craiger. It's going to be an interesting journey. I haven't written a story since high school, which was some time ago, so here's hoping it turns out ok. It should be fun.
    If your story writing got you good marks in high school - you should get even better marks here!




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    Re: Dave Mate!

    more please, like it!!

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Hey JAG Thanks. Wonderful continuation.
    Thanks for your assurance that they both live through the tale !! So, if Rawiri hasn't gone to finish it all, has he gone back to the meeting house to consult his ancestors?
    More please
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    I hope Ra is okay!

    One of my (okay probably my BEST) good friends is a Kiwi. It was nice to see this. It reminded me of him.

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Oh lordy, JAG. I am feeling the hurt Dave is having. Whatever could have changed Ra's mind so quickly? This can't go on. They need desperately to talk this out.

    That said, great chapter, because I really did feel the hurt.

    Craiger

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    OH GOD, i must have more to read! This is amazing, I feel so bad for Dave.

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    That was a good chapter. You made dave's fear of losing ra a little more developed since chapter 11. Definitely no bigger tiki. Bigger problem for Dave though. hah I smell a big make up sex going to happen.

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Oh Dear! "The path of true love never runs smooth"
    So apparently Ra has decided he has to produce a son & heir. Please continue
    Harry

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    Great story. Looking forward to the next installment.

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Poor Ra! So torn between what he wants with Dave and what he is not receiving from his ancestors. How true that is for so many young men. The torture can be indescribable. Society can put such a stigma on us that denying ourselves is the only way we can cope.

    That was one intense chapter and hopefully a break through for Ra and Dave. Thanks, JAG.

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Dear JustaGuy,
    I wanted to let you know that I was following, but when you reposted, it wasn't in my subscriptions, and I didn't get back into the main story forum for a bit - sorry to have missed all this new action. It was just getting exciting when you dropped off my radar.

    I will endeavor to get caught up so I can post intelligently - or at least current relative to your story line.

    I've enjoyed what you've written through the end of part one - twice now!

    Talk to you in a bit of reading!

    Take care, and thanks for all of the time and energy you put into this story for all of us.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Dear JustaGuy,
    The second part has been heartwrenching. Rawiri trying to hurt Dave with his fucking him, but he couldn't do it - it tears him apart too much to put on an act.

    Our Ancestors -- a bigger part of some cultures than others, but they build our mores and expectations, in any case.

    We are complex beings, and we don't all fall under the top of the umbrella curve in all things.

    I can feel the love, the angst, the "anger", the frustration, the needs, the desires.

    You are doing a fine job of connecting with Rawiri and Daves' fealings, and conveying them to us.

    Thank you for all of your efforts.

    I look forward to the next installments.



    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Great two chapters! Really diverse directions. Poor Ra needing the permission of his ancestors and Dave having to go through all that . Getting better each chapter. Look forward to the next one. Good luck with the writing.

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    Thank you, thank you, thank you! Yes that was big sex alright, but not make-up sex. lol

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    Not much different than growing up in a Christian environment.

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    Great Story I cant wait to read more!

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Thanks JAG, wonderful chapter.
    I hope they can work things out together with the ancestors.
    More please
    Harry

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    pretty cool

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Dear JustaGuy,
    A great, very real chapter.

    Close call with Steve, but those little "difficulties" are what help pull them together, pulling for each other, into a united front and stance - helping them to become one, together.

    I think, in the back of my mind that, once the elders see them running on all 8 cylinders, "cooking with gas", being in-synch with each other, they will have nothing to say but yes.

    Elders have a way of surprising us - they have wisdom that comes with age, and with the metamorphosis from the land of the living to the land of the everafter.

    Their wisdom is not our wisdom - just ask the good Lord God Almighty - it's right there in the bible!

    I am thoroughly enjoying your story, if you couldn't tell by now. It offers a quality that some lack. A simple honesty and freshness.

    Thank you for sharing it with us.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    I am so relieved that Dave and Ra are reunited in a positive way now. I am sure, working together, they will receive some sign from the ancestors. In a way their problem now is how to face Steve. I don't think he is going to let this go and it may make it uncomfortable for the two of them. Hope not. Steve may be very understanding. I love this story.

    Craiger

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    its a really good story so far
    it has a romantic side with a hot side to

    i wish i was like that my highschool/college year

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    One of my fave stories on here, I think. Keep it coming, it's awesome.

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    this is brill, i am loving the story. I am very much looking forward to the next instalment
    OMG!!!!, Its like a Walrus flossing!!!!!

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    Dear Fellow Readers:
    If you haven't, yet, please take a moment to Rate This Thread for our fellow members to be able to see what you think of this story at at glance of the forum. Let JustaGuy know how you value his efforts.

    Top Right of the page has a drop-down.
    Thanks!


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    Dear JustaGuy,
    Another Great installment. Your story is so well crafted, and so believable.
    I'm enjoying the pace of discovery, enjoyment, angst, anticipation, resolve, togetherness all wrapped up in one.

    I can feel the characters in your writing.

    Thank you for sharing your toughts and desires as told thru these two guys with us.



    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    As I said before, Steve could be a problem, however, I think Dave's dad could also be a problem. I doubt if his reaction will be very positive. But then again, I am only surmising. I liked this chapter as we get an inkling of how much Dave is committed to this relationship. Good show!

    Craiger

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    great part
    leaves me wondering

    cant wait for the next

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    Great installment. Can't wait for the next one!

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    JustaGuy,
    YOU earned them.
    I just reminded people they existed and asked them to used them - I took a page from HR and Tantiboh's books in promoting them.

    But, again, YOU earned them. You did all the work. I didn't tell them WHAT to give you, just to rank the thread. If they hadn't liked what they were reading, it could have been 1 star instead of five -- but I had good faith, based on my discriminating literary palette.

    Congratulations.


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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Thanks JAG. Wonderful chapter.
    Will the Ancestors speak ??
    Please continue
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    Brilliant story thus far. Thank you very much.

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    The gods have spoken? Well written chapter! Thanks JUG!

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    YOU HAD TO STOP AT THE BEST PART DIDNT YOU
    so far so good cant wait for the next part

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    Dear JustaGuy,
    Another great chapter. The quiet caring, being there for each other and their future together.

    What is the loud noise? Is it the ancestors? Rawiri's Mother or Father?

    The story continues to unfold at a measured pace, the reality of their lives.

    You make their story ours, and you make it, and them, live for us.

    Thank you for your continuing efforts to bring us this wonderful tale.



    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    I have a love/hate relationship with cliffhangers... lol Seriously, that was an intense chapter. Ra's faith in his ancestors and Dave's love. Being the romantic that I am, I have a warm fuzzy feeling that everything is going to be OK. So many thoughts are going through my mind as to what caused the noise, but I will wait diligently for your continued writings.

    Craiger

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    love it, i can't wait to find out what going to happen next

    thanks for the great story so far!
    OMG!!!!, Its like a Walrus flossing!!!!!

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Beautiful, Loving. wonderful chapter.
    Thank you JAG.
    So what is the answer??
    More soon please.
    Harry

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    Such a good story!!!!
    more please

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Ah, the ancestors are speaking to him through the bird.

    And what does our little messenger have to say to them?

    Words of encouragement, I hope.

    Your story continues to captivate, even at this frustratingly "slow" pace - teaching us that we have to be patient and wait for them, not the other way around. It is a common teaching.

    Here's hoping that the other expression about waiting and patience comes true - Good Things Come to Those Who Wait.

    Thanks for working so hard on developing this wonderful story.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Jag this story is the reason i made an account!! such a good story, i dread reading each new chapter cause i know it will end, but then i just read the whole thing over :P

    this is fantastic, i hope u write a new chapter soon

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Jag, Thanks. Great chapter, but you are keeping us all in suspense !!
    The singing bird is happy, so are the ancestors also happy ??
    Please continue
    Harry

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    And you have me in suspense, JAG! I hope Dave doesn't lose faith, Ra certainly hasn't. The signs can be so subtle but if their love is true, they both will be able to recognize them. Great chapter.

    Craiger

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    Excellent story. Fingers crossed for the two lovebirds.

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    JustaGuy,
    This was a GREAT conclusion to his visit to his ancestors, asking their permission.

    Your writing style is very clean, inviting. I feel for both of the guys while reading your words. The snippets of Maori culture that we get to learn is great, too.

    I hope their parents are half as understanding as the elders/ancestors were.

    I'm looking forward to your next installment.
    I know Dave is looking forward to TONIGHT! lol.

    Thanks, again, for all of your hard work.


    And I know, if I'll only be true, to this glorious quest . . .

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    Re: Dave Mate!

    Ra's last words to his ancestors brought tears to my eyes. How wonderfully enlightened he has become through his faith in his ancestors. Now it is Dave's turn to learn the way of the maori. But................ we still have Steve to contend with. I know we are in for some great chapters. Thanks, JAG.

    Craiger

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