Cuddly Bear
April 19th, 2006, 05:53 AM
Here is another story, I had to get this short story out of my head and onto paper. This is the result, I doubt he'll make people hard, usually a longer story is better for people to stroke to. Enjoy.
The Unexpected Visit
By Brandon
I walked into the kitchen to get something to drink, my mouth has been dry all damn day, school was such a stressful time with all the tests and stuff that I had. I opened the fridge hearing knocking at the front door. I walked over stopping, I was in my shorts, and I heard the knocking continue.
“Hold on I’m coming.” I said to the person knocking loudly.
First thought was it might have been the landlord pissed off at me for playing my music too loud the other night, but then it might be some sexy guy at the front door wanting to give me head, I laughed out loud not thinking. I made it to the door turning the knob.
“Brandon?” the person in the dark said to me.
“Who are you?” I asked him.
A hand appeared through the shadows slapping me across the face, I could almost feel the impact of his fingers hitting my nose, and I looked at the person showing his face from the light inside my apartment.
“What the fuck, why the hell did you do that?” I screamed at the person finally seeing who it was.
My heart skipped a beat; I hadn’t expected this person to visit me. It was Luis, the light reflecting off from his glasses making me unable to see his eyes. I shook my head in disbelieve, he came up to me hugging me, I still wanted to know what the slap was for.
“Why did you slap me Luis?” I asked him feeling his body rubbing against mine.
“Because you aren’t ugly Brandon, and you know that!” Luis said looking at me.
I blushed looking at him; he came all this way to slap me just because of my careless comments about my face. I closed the door when he walked in; I took his coat putting it into the closet. I looked back at Luis he smiled at me, coming closer to me and giving me another hug. We walked over to my couch sitting down. I looked at him kind of serious; I wanted to know why he was here.
“Luis, why are you here?” I asked him kind of stupid that I asked the question.
“Because I wanted to visit you, is that a problem?” he told me.
“No it’s perfectly okay” I said to him looking down.
“Brandon, why do you think you’re ugly?” Luis said putting his hand on my knee.
I looked at him, why do I have the feeling like he wants to make love to me right now in my living room? I didn’t move his hand off my knee, but I put my hand on his. I wanted to make this conversation as serious as I could.
“You know how it is when you walk around into a gay community, nobody notices you, and nobody checks you out. I’ve had it done to me many times before Luis; it’s not a good experience.” I told him.
“Brandon, you’re just over reacting, I bet there have been guys that have wanted you, but they might have been too afraid to talk to you” He told me.
I felt my hand starting to shake; I’ve never had a sudden out burst like this before. I started to tear up; before I knew it Luis was rubbing my arm, I looked at him, and he got closer giving me a kiss on the lips. I couldn’t believe this was happening but it was, we started to kiss again deeply, rubbing each other’s arms. We made out for almost five minutes, until he lifted my shirt off from my body throwing it to the floor; he rubbed my hairy stomach kissing me again. My cock was getting hard, I’ve never made out with another guy my own age before, I took off his shirt revealing his body, he was more in shape than I was but I hope he didn’t get disgusted with mine. I rubbed his chest kissing him on the lips, our mouths parted away from each other.
“Brandon, my cock is so hard; I need to let it out.” Luis said.
I couldn’t help it anymore I unzipped his pants taking out his dick from his underwear; I kissed him again stroking his cock. My tongue going inside his mouth, I could feel his hands squeezing and rubbing my crotch. I stopped kissing him for a moment to go down on his cock, taking it into my mouth it was so warm going, his precum leaking on my tongue it tasted kind of sweet but the feel of his dick in my mouth made up for that. I went up and down, taking all of his six inches into my mouth, my fingers rubbing against his balls, I knew the sensation felt good because I could hear him moan while my tongue tickled his head on his cock.
I lifted myself up from him, he looked at me squeezing my cock, my legs came together, and my cock was poking straight up my pants. Luis unzipped my pants rubbing my cock sticking his hand inside.
“Wait…” I told him.
“What? Brandon I already know what the size is, stop being so insecure.” He told me taking a hold of my semi hard cock.
He pulled my cock out taking it into his mouth, his warm mouth covering my cock head. He sucked on the tip of it; it felt so good when he sucked it with his mouth. I started to breathe hard unable to make a sound of pleasure. He tickled my balls with his fingers it felt kind of weird but after a while it felt so damn hot, his wet tongue making my cock nice and wet. He took his mouth off my cock kissing me on the mouth again.
“Brandon, this is so hot please, take your clothes off, I’ll take mine off too” Luis said.
I took off my pants standing there, he took of his clothes as well, and we got closer kissing, our wet hard cocks touching, rubbing, the connection felt so right. We sat on the couch making out; I took a hold of his cock while he took a hold of mine. We started to jerk each other off slowly, kissing again, my cock hard in his hand my precum rubbing against his hand making it nice and slippery. We picked up the pace at the same exact time, his six inch cock starting to throb. We stopped kissing for a minute
“Oh yeah, I’m going to cum Brandon, keep going oh yeah! UGH! OH MY GOD! YES!!!!!!!!!!” Luis said.
He shot hitting his chest and face, some of his cum even landed on my own body. I licked some of it off. He stroked me faster and faster before I knew it I was dribbling all over his hand, he looked at me and smiled. We both kissed each other sitting there on the couch exhausted. I looked up at the ceiling not believing that any of this happened. I felt his hand rub my belly, his cum making belly hairs all sticky.
“That was great Brandon, now what do you think now?” Luis said to me.
“I don’t know Luis. I really don’t know” I told him.
I shook my head feeling like this couldn’t be true. I looked over to him, his eyes closed. I looked back at the ceiling. I couldn’t believe that this small short experience was something that would change my mind about the way I viewed guys my own age.
The Unexpected Visit
By Brandon
I walked into the kitchen to get something to drink, my mouth has been dry all damn day, school was such a stressful time with all the tests and stuff that I had. I opened the fridge hearing knocking at the front door. I walked over stopping, I was in my shorts, and I heard the knocking continue.
“Hold on I’m coming.” I said to the person knocking loudly.
First thought was it might have been the landlord pissed off at me for playing my music too loud the other night, but then it might be some sexy guy at the front door wanting to give me head, I laughed out loud not thinking. I made it to the door turning the knob.
“Brandon?” the person in the dark said to me.
“Who are you?” I asked him.
A hand appeared through the shadows slapping me across the face, I could almost feel the impact of his fingers hitting my nose, and I looked at the person showing his face from the light inside my apartment.
“What the fuck, why the hell did you do that?” I screamed at the person finally seeing who it was.
My heart skipped a beat; I hadn’t expected this person to visit me. It was Luis, the light reflecting off from his glasses making me unable to see his eyes. I shook my head in disbelieve, he came up to me hugging me, I still wanted to know what the slap was for.
“Why did you slap me Luis?” I asked him feeling his body rubbing against mine.
“Because you aren’t ugly Brandon, and you know that!” Luis said looking at me.
I blushed looking at him; he came all this way to slap me just because of my careless comments about my face. I closed the door when he walked in; I took his coat putting it into the closet. I looked back at Luis he smiled at me, coming closer to me and giving me another hug. We walked over to my couch sitting down. I looked at him kind of serious; I wanted to know why he was here.
“Luis, why are you here?” I asked him kind of stupid that I asked the question.
“Because I wanted to visit you, is that a problem?” he told me.
“No it’s perfectly okay” I said to him looking down.
“Brandon, why do you think you’re ugly?” Luis said putting his hand on my knee.
I looked at him, why do I have the feeling like he wants to make love to me right now in my living room? I didn’t move his hand off my knee, but I put my hand on his. I wanted to make this conversation as serious as I could.
“You know how it is when you walk around into a gay community, nobody notices you, and nobody checks you out. I’ve had it done to me many times before Luis; it’s not a good experience.” I told him.
“Brandon, you’re just over reacting, I bet there have been guys that have wanted you, but they might have been too afraid to talk to you” He told me.
I felt my hand starting to shake; I’ve never had a sudden out burst like this before. I started to tear up; before I knew it Luis was rubbing my arm, I looked at him, and he got closer giving me a kiss on the lips. I couldn’t believe this was happening but it was, we started to kiss again deeply, rubbing each other’s arms. We made out for almost five minutes, until he lifted my shirt off from my body throwing it to the floor; he rubbed my hairy stomach kissing me again. My cock was getting hard, I’ve never made out with another guy my own age before, I took off his shirt revealing his body, he was more in shape than I was but I hope he didn’t get disgusted with mine. I rubbed his chest kissing him on the lips, our mouths parted away from each other.
“Brandon, my cock is so hard; I need to let it out.” Luis said.
I couldn’t help it anymore I unzipped his pants taking out his dick from his underwear; I kissed him again stroking his cock. My tongue going inside his mouth, I could feel his hands squeezing and rubbing my crotch. I stopped kissing him for a moment to go down on his cock, taking it into my mouth it was so warm going, his precum leaking on my tongue it tasted kind of sweet but the feel of his dick in my mouth made up for that. I went up and down, taking all of his six inches into my mouth, my fingers rubbing against his balls, I knew the sensation felt good because I could hear him moan while my tongue tickled his head on his cock.
I lifted myself up from him, he looked at me squeezing my cock, my legs came together, and my cock was poking straight up my pants. Luis unzipped my pants rubbing my cock sticking his hand inside.
“Wait…” I told him.
“What? Brandon I already know what the size is, stop being so insecure.” He told me taking a hold of my semi hard cock.
He pulled my cock out taking it into his mouth, his warm mouth covering my cock head. He sucked on the tip of it; it felt so good when he sucked it with his mouth. I started to breathe hard unable to make a sound of pleasure. He tickled my balls with his fingers it felt kind of weird but after a while it felt so damn hot, his wet tongue making my cock nice and wet. He took his mouth off my cock kissing me on the mouth again.
“Brandon, this is so hot please, take your clothes off, I’ll take mine off too” Luis said.
I took off my pants standing there, he took of his clothes as well, and we got closer kissing, our wet hard cocks touching, rubbing, the connection felt so right. We sat on the couch making out; I took a hold of his cock while he took a hold of mine. We started to jerk each other off slowly, kissing again, my cock hard in his hand my precum rubbing against his hand making it nice and slippery. We picked up the pace at the same exact time, his six inch cock starting to throb. We stopped kissing for a minute
“Oh yeah, I’m going to cum Brandon, keep going oh yeah! UGH! OH MY GOD! YES!!!!!!!!!!” Luis said.
He shot hitting his chest and face, some of his cum even landed on my own body. I licked some of it off. He stroked me faster and faster before I knew it I was dribbling all over his hand, he looked at me and smiled. We both kissed each other sitting there on the couch exhausted. I looked up at the ceiling not believing that any of this happened. I felt his hand rub my belly, his cum making belly hairs all sticky.
“That was great Brandon, now what do you think now?” Luis said to me.
“I don’t know Luis. I really don’t know” I told him.
I shook my head feeling like this couldn’t be true. I looked over to him, his eyes closed. I looked back at the ceiling. I couldn’t believe that this small short experience was something that would change my mind about the way I viewed guys my own age.