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cdg9899
January 6th, 2006, 01:23 AM
Hey, I hope this is okay. It involves 18+ characters b/c this is college and I hope this isn't inappropriate violence. I see it more as locker room horseplay.

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Craig was a cocky freshman soccer player in college who mouthed off to the college football team one too many times about how football wasn’t really a manly sport and how soccer was so much better. He would taunt his football-playing friends in between classes and during lunchtime: football players were “meatheads” who needed to feel “manly” by putting all their pads. It was a “gay” sport because the quarterback had to put his hands up some other guy’s ass.

The football players got tired of this and hatched a plan one day after practice to make Craig pay for his words. They talked gleefully about how they were going to mess with Craig. “Yeah, dudes, Craig is going to be one sorry SOB,” one football player said. “Or how about just our bitch,” another football player laughed, cupping his crotch and massaging it while the others jeered him on: “Hell yeah, dude!”

One day after practice, there were fifteen varsity football jocks waiting for Craig when he walked into the locker room. Their football practice had ended a little earlier than the soccer practice, so they took their time getting into the locker room and dawdled and delayed until Craig came in – easy to do since there’s a lot of horsing around that goes on anyway.

When Craig walked into the locker room—slightly sore from a hard practice, sweaty, walking along with his usual arrogant jaunt—he didn’t notice the football players quietly appearing out of nowhere and blocking off either side of the aisle where his locker was. He looked up, startled, when one of them called out, “Hey fag!”

Before he knew what was going on or could attempt to run out, they rushed him and grabbed his arms and legs and lifted him up in the air. Cries of “Grab him!” and “Guys, get his legs, we’ll get his arms!” echoed throughout the locker room. There were other boys nearby but no one wanted to get in the way of the football players.

Craig was struggled like a madman, shouting, thrashing around, trying to break free, but the jocks had him. In desperation, he reached out and clawed wildly onto the edge of the locker, a bench, anything to hold onto, but stronger hands pried his fingers away as the mass of shouting, hooting, hollering football players triumphantly spirited away their struggling catch.

They carried him into the varsity locker room and slammed the door shut. There were about twenty football jocks in the room, of all shapes and sizes, but most were very good looking, cruel arrogant jocks who also wrestled or played lacrosse or baseball. All were in various states of undress, but most were still in full pads with their helmets taken off. Quite a few, however, had taken off their jerseys and shoulder pads—just Underarmour shirts underneath—and had partially unlaced their pants showing the waistband of jocks and UA shorts.

No adults were around. They threw him down on the ground and surrounded him. Craig looked wildly around him, yelled “F**k,” and tried to make a break through the pack of football players. But they merely laughed and a bunch of them took hold of his arms and another bunch grabbed his legs. He was suspended in the air again and the football players surrounded him, taunting him. “Lemme go guys, dammit, lemme go!” he cried desperately.

Someone yanked off his shoes and tossed them away. Two other pairs of hands simultaneously pulled down his soccer shorts and his shirt was simply ripped off his upper body by three more pairs of hands. He was practically naked: just his black Underarmour compression shorts. That’s it.

Craig was held down to a padded bench (for the furnishings were much nicer for the varsity football team) and the captain of the football team stepped up to him with a sneer on his face. “Looks like the freshman fag needs some oxygen. Hold him tight, boys!” The captain had his shoulder pads off so his upper body muscles showed through his UA shirt; his tight pants were partially unlaced. You could clearly see the words Underarmour printed in black and white on the waistband of his compression shorts.

As Craig struggled wildly to get free—and as the jocks held him to the bench ever tighter—the captain reached down into the front of his pants and freed the cup—one of the deep banana-style cups—from his compression shorts. After working it out of the built-in pocket, he held it up for all the guys to see—they pumped in their fists in the air and yelled louder, “Give that fag some oxygen!—thrust the cup onto Craig’s face and, no matter which way Craig twisted his face, held the cup to his nose and mouth. The sound of Craig yelling was muffled by the cup. It stank of sweat.

There was a look of sheer terror and disgust on Craig’s face, as probably ten or so football players pressed down on various parts of his body—his feet, his thighs, his torso, his upper body, his arms— to keep him still and howled in delight. The rest of the varsity players were crowded around to watch the scene unfold and jeered just as loudly.

biguy87
January 6th, 2006, 02:44 AM
Want more!!! :D:D:D

bluegrassladdie
January 6th, 2006, 02:32 PM
good potential for your story, look forward to next installment

kcm17480
January 11th, 2006, 06:33 AM
Great start. I hope there will be more.

passingby
January 12th, 2006, 02:25 PM
seriously, you just ended the story like that. and of course, we'd like to hear more of this. pls...

cdg9899
May 18th, 2006, 05:08 PM
Hey guys, I'm working on part two to this story but I'm having a hard time. Any ideas of what should happen next? And better yet, anyone witness similar such experiences in their h.s. or college locker rooms? Need fresh ideas...!

poetstud1981
May 22nd, 2006, 12:36 PM
good storie mate but i ahve no ideas on what should ahppen next

its upto u mate

but good storie none the less

cdg9899
May 30th, 2006, 05:16 AM
Craig was deeply humiliated and very afraid.

A freshman soccer player with an athletic body—hairless chest, six pack abs, and nice pecs—he had been captured by a group of varsity football players who were sick of his arrogant attitude and intent on putting him in his proper place. Craig was now trapped in the varsity football locker room, sealed off physically from the main locker room and completely out of sight from his teammates on the soccer team who couldn’t even hear him yelling.

He had been yelling as the jocks—about twenty of them—held him up in the air, his arms and legs splayed out, as they stripped him of his soccer jersey and shorts, leaving him in just his black Underarmour compression shorts. Craig was pretty good-looking for a freshman, and in his bedroom at home, he would sometimes admire himself in the mirror when he was shirtless and wearing just his compression shorts. But that was in the privacy of his own bedroom. Not in the fluorescent glare of a locker room.

He had been yelling when they put him down on a padded bench in the middle of the locker room and held him there, surrounding him, taunting him, as beefy jocks each held down an arm or a leg or pressed down on his thighs and torso. As valiantly as he struggled to escape their grasp, ten pairs of hairy, muscular arms restraining his body were too much physical power to overcome.

And he had been yelling especially loudly when the team captain—an enormously muscular senior named Derek who also captained the lacrosse team—pulled his banana-style cup out of his jockstrap from beneath his partially-unlaced football pants and pressed the cup against Craig’s face. This was an old hazing ritual called “jockygen,” but it usually involved more harmless fun when one player chased after another player in the locker room attempting to stick his cup in someone’s face.

This was different. This was meaner in spirit. This was almost half the entire football team ganging up on one very unlucky kid who wasn’t even a football player. They were out to humiliate him, and administering “jockygen” gang-style like this was the perfect way to do it.

Derek and the other jocks were thoroughly enjoying watching Craig squirm as he breathed through the well-worn athletic cup that was being held to his mouth. It stank to high heaven, a sour smell that smelled of old jockstraps, sweaty spandex shorts, and grimy football pads. Derek’s right hand was firmly on top of Craig’s head as his left hand held the cup to his nose and mouth. Everyone around him was yelling and hooting.

One of the players in charge of pressing down on Craig’s thighs to keep him still happened to look down at Craig’s compression shorts and noticed a hard nub that was developing in Craig’s crotch. It was more than a nub. It was growing into a definite bulge. The player—a junior named Tyler who also wrestled in the winter and played baseball in the spring—grinned evilly and pressed his hand innocently against the bulge. The bulge in the spandex shorts responded almost spring-like to his touch. It was definitely a boner. Tyler looked up at his teammates, got their attention with a smile and a wink, and said, “Hey guys, check it out.” He palmed Craig’s boner, causing it to stick out even more against the tight black spandex fabric.

Craig knew two things were happening at once. First, he was being utterly humiliated. Looking up from the locker room bench, he could see at least ten jocks pressing down on his body, most of them shirtless but with partially unlaced football pants still on. He was aware that there were at least ten other players—probably more now—in the background who were on their tiptoes to get a better look at Craig’s jockygen treatment. He could feel Derek’s hand on his head and smell the cup still up against his face.

But the other thing happening to him was way beyond humiliating. It was dangerous. Craig considered himself as straight as they come—and even in junior high, he had managed to hook up with a number of girls—but for some reason, all the hairy, muscular arms pressing down on his body, the musky cup pressed over his face, was getting a strange reaction out of him. He could feel his cock slowly stiffening. He was getting hard. And he knew that getting hard was the worst possible thing that could happen to him.

“Holy shit,” Tyler yelled, “He’s got a fucking boner. He’s got a fucking hard-on!”

“No fucking way,” another player called out, “Is it for real? Is this frosh really a fag?”

Murmurs of disgust arose from the players. Even though they had called him a fag as they carried him into the locker room, they didn’t really think that Craig would actually be so fag-like as to spring a boner. It was disgusting. It was against the male athletic code.

“Holy shit,” Derek, the team captain, started saying slowly, “He really is a fag.” Everyone caught on real quick. “He really is a FUCKING FAG!” they started to yell.

And without anyone saying anything specific, the mood in the locker room changed dramatically. The fun and games were over. This wasn’t just a simple hazing stunt. Craig had been stupid enough to show the players that he was getting sexually aroused. Something else was going to happen now.

“Let’s REALLY teach this FUCKING FAG a lesson.” It got quiet. Derek had removed the cup from Craig’s face, as Craig whimpered softly now, “Oh god, please let me go. Please let me go. This is all a mistake. I’m not a fag.” The other players watched Craig with a nasty mean look in their eyes. Their breathing got husky. They were full of super-charged testosterone and very horny. And now that they had a faggot trapped in their midst, a victim who had dared spring a boner while being held down, they were going to act out their horniness. They were going to get their way with Craig and have some fun.

The jocks on the varsity football team were going to gang rape the freshman soccer player.

Jackers
May 30th, 2006, 08:35 PM
Oh my god.... what happened to him next?

Un_Golfo
May 31st, 2006, 12:39 AM
Hummm... I think this soon will get nasty...

HazeMaster
May 31st, 2006, 09:15 AM
Please Sir, can I have some more?

pedros2252
May 31st, 2006, 09:59 AM
oh!is this one,one you create your own ending!!......rather the story-tellers ending!!!....i'm waiting.....

pedros2252
May 31st, 2006, 10:02 AM
also i have enjoyed reading it...very bone up-lifting story!!!

aneal_lingus
May 31st, 2006, 11:59 AM
This story is getting interesting. please tell me we don't have to wait another 5 months to hear the next part.

HazeMaster
June 2nd, 2006, 04:59 AM
Where's the next part?

When do we see the humpy football players gang bang Craig??

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falloutboy
June 2nd, 2006, 09:48 PM
Oh My God, I Was All Working It Then, And Now Nothing!!!!!!

kcm17480
June 3rd, 2006, 05:02 AM
I would like to see how the story turned out.

cdg9899
June 4th, 2006, 05:28 PM
Thanks for the positive responses. I'll try to write something soon, but I have to admit, I've never written an explicitly sexual scene before. I want to make the gang rape seem as realistic as possible. Stay tuned.

jasonlim_1981
June 5th, 2006, 04:50 PM
Beginning}}}} Hot!!!
Second Part}} Very hot!!!!!

Hoping that the climax would make me more Hotter... Keep it up buddy I like it...

mastabeta
August 10th, 2006, 03:10 AM
come on more!!! please

HazeMaster
August 10th, 2006, 05:17 AM
come on more!!! please

Ditto!!!!!

Caution
August 13th, 2006, 11:24 PM
Lovnig it anyway i hope Craig know now NOT to mess with Football players

SexyGuy
August 14th, 2006, 09:32 PM
Interesting...I think I remember this story from a certain site...What was it? Oh, yes. It was www.nifty.org

cdg9899
June 11th, 2007, 02:24 PM
I'm the author of this story, which was also posted to the Nifty archives as well. I've written two installments so far but gotten stuck writing the third one, probably because actually writing a gang rape scene is hot but tricky. I want to do it well, and I'd like to try my hand at it in the next few weeks.

If anyone on here has any suggestions on what to write, how to write it, please let me know.

ALSO if you've been on a varsity football team before, please tell me and give me some realistic details--about the locker room itself, or what guys did after practices--that'll help the story sound better. I really, really want to hear from you!!!

Many thanks for your positive feedback, and many thanks in advance for any input. Feel free to just post on this board or send me a private message.

cleanlegs
June 12th, 2007, 09:55 PM
more please!!

belthazor
June 16th, 2007, 08:38 AM
very, very HOOT story!!
finish it with all of the football varsities are fucking and sucking each other..*|*

youngnhung
June 16th, 2007, 09:46 AM
dear cdg9899, hey man..have written a few freelance stories in the past that involved rape type environments...you have to be descriptive enough to get the point across, but allow some ambiguity to play, just to give the reader the idea, but not all the details of each person raping him. usually, in this kind of situation, there are no more than a handful of guys that actually do the raping..it's like porn, focus in on the parts that are going to show the pain, the humiliation, and if possible a twist at the end..nothing like that to make a rape scene turn into something different...as far as the football locker rooms, you have the team managers, the guys that only sit on the bench, and then the main players.. You want to focus on a couple of silent players that step up to do the nasty when you don't expect it..and a few of the main characters..Keep up the good work..if you want to chat..my email address is *EDIT* Email addy removed.

TriBi
June 17th, 2007, 02:40 AM
^ Also - as regards the above - I would remind people of the JUB Code of Conduct (link at bottom left of every post).

In this instance, worth remembering pont # 3:
Please do not post or link to pictures, movies, or stories that combine sex with violence, bestiality or other potentially obscene material. Any depiction or discussion of forced sex or bondage is against Canadian law.

Thanks!

frogorange123
June 21st, 2007, 07:32 AM
HOt story, more.

tomersh
November 7th, 2007, 03:31 AM
keep going...why did you stop?

Midnight-
November 7th, 2007, 08:08 AM
great story but what happens next?

Desire
November 8th, 2007, 02:14 AM
great story
loved it
have to admit it got me very HARD alos...*|*